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for The Viking Brothers

by ChibiMisu

person White Nymph
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are too mean for words, someone had better get their ases in there and save Yugi and Bakura (holders battle axe menacingly) I mean Bakuras sligly more harder than Yugi, but its stilt fat fair on him, and yes I know he did the same to Ryou......but, i haven't got anymore to argue that he should be saved ASAP but please, get someone to save him, hes the best!!!
White Nymph
person PharaohAtemu04
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Ra!!!! I loved that chapter€!! I waited for so long to read the battle chapter and now I am sooooo happy, I just want to cry, hahahaha, well I hope you update soon, I wonder what is gonna happen to Yugi and the others and why is Keith most of all after Yami and not after Mrik or Bakura? I can't wait to read the next ter.ter. Hope to see ya soon. Bye
person Elle-Fate2x1
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO!! Poor Bakura, Malik, Ryou and Yugi!! OOOOOOOOO!!!!! *cry*
*let out battle cry* I shall fight too *crab pot as a helmet and frying pan* For the YGO bishies!! *run* Chrage!!!!
Great chappy ne? U better update soon I can't stand such an ebil cliffie! *look* back to fighting byes!!
person yaoigoddess
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! This has got to be on of my favorite Yugioh stories ever. Please update as soon as you can. I hope Yami and the rest of them defeat Keith's army before any of them get seriously hurt. (not keith's guys, they could burn) I also hope Ryou and Bakura get together and get married. Bakura is the most stubborn of the yami's even in the show. Please update soon ^ ^
person verdragon
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww, that stinks. I'm so sorry that it's been giving you heck. Just wanted to let you know that I adore the story, and I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!
person Deb
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dont worry huni! owlsowls at AFF*
Im waiting patiently! ^__^
Much Luv
Debs xxx
P.S. LOVE THIS STORY!!!
person Iris
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's allright. You're doing a wonderful job and it will be a shame if you'll let a stupid PC problems stop you.
person White Nymph
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you amnage to sort those problems out soon, this story is really good, WE NEED MORE
White Nymph
person Koishii_No_Tenshi
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OoOo!!! Please update soon! I can't wait to read what happens next! Though, adultfanfiction did something to chapters 7, 14, and 18 and I couldn't read them. I think they deleted the chapters or something. So, can you send me thapthapters? My e-mail is koishii_no_tenshi@yahoo.ca. Thanks much ^^. Update soon!
person Arainaina
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good please keep up the great work