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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! NUUUUUUUUUU EVIL CLIFFHANGER! NONONONONONONONONONONO! and go Yugi X Yami, Marik X Malik. you shouee my roy room :| yu-gi-oh! mania! anyway, nicely written chapter, BRING MORE. i wish stupid adultfanfiction would stop going down and then up again!....yeah. I'M LEGAL. not that you need to know. :) MORE MORE MORE EVIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIL CLIFFHANGER! -runs!-
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better! Duke is gonna be in a hell of a lot of ble ble if he's captured again by Keith. At least he's expected tomorrow so that everyone will know that he's missing! Ryou's developed a backbone! Yay!!! Wonder what he has in mind... Malik seems to be rather over confident when it comes to mastering swordsmenship and challenging Marik, but isn't that what we all love about him? LoL! Evil cliffies! They're all over this fic!!!!!
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Ryou and Yugi! I'm loving this story! You must write the next chapter soon or I'll die!
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Ryou and Yugi! I'm loving this story! You must write the next chapter soon or I'll die!
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gerat chapter!! I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! What's going to happen between Ryou and Bakura? Are Duke and Tristan going to be okay? Is Keith going to die? I simp-ly can't wait to find out!!!
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, it's been so long (it seems) since i last wrote~! I'm so happy though I can still read the story-since the site was having problems! Poor Ryou, what's going to happen to my baby!...I mean Bakura's baby - Plus now that Keithy's escape, it's gonna get good! Please continue, I love your story!
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August 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to be honest I don't think i've ever reviewed this story before. I couldn't tell you why though because i've been reading it for the past several months. I love it I think it's brilliant you have an excellent style to your writing and I think your work is just absolutely wonderful. Would it be to much to ask for an email when you update. If it is I understand. Thank you.
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August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another really great chapter please keep up the great work. I wish to read another chpter soon
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chapter!!!! It's awesome! Can't wait for the next update!! (8
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it!!! Your a really great writer. I like how you dont favor, and let bad things happen. Please write more soon.
P.S. Your story is very original.
P.S. Your story is very original.