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Yay you finally updated! im so glad its not ending yet, i loveeee this story

cute chapter. Go ryou! Make bakura jealous! can't wait until that happens ^_^

LMAO!!
Oh this is going to be excellent!!!! Eeeee i cant wait to read that bit!!!!!
Marik, Malik and Ryou together is soooooo gonna piss Bakura off! Hahahaha!
Hope Yams will be ok...and Yugi...i bet he's quite upset that he didnt see Yami off now...
Cant wait to read more huni!!
Please update again soonies!
Much Luv
Debs xxx

XD Minky mink. I like that one. *giggles* Great chapter, and I'm really looking forward to the next one!

Oh that is naughty but oh so ingenious. I just love this story. i do think you are being a tad mean to Ryou. Him and Bakura are my two favorite characters. This plan had better work. Keep up the good work
White Nymph

argh thats an evil place to leave it, i want to see how the 'master plan' goes. Its going to be hysterical you are definatly a genious

(I was NaiyaTook afore, but I ain't now. ^^)

Sorry I haven't reviewed the past few times, I haven't gotten a chance to look and see if you updated. T_T *grumbles about her million messages on DevArt*

So anyways, this story keeps getting better and better! My friend recommended this story to me a while ago, you know her as DvorakLv. I was slightly wary, but when I looked at the pairings, I grinned. Nobody ever does a good Malik/Marik story... T_T But this keeps me sated. :D Thankies for that as well.

The descriptions for certain parts in the story is just amazing. It's so well detailed and beautiful, making the story smooth and fluid. *insert large words here* The battle scenes were wonderful, making me wish I was there. >.> Only with a staff... ^^

The twists and turns in the story were just amazing, and I'm loving every bit of it. :D And please, for the sake of all the Tendershippers, make sure Bakura an' Ryou get together. XD I'm such a sap for that. ^^;

And Ootogi and Honda! *squeee* I'm thrilled you put that pairing in. I think I've only read two others like that. It's just about as rare as Malik and Marik. >.> You better make this have a good ending. Or else I shall hunt you down and gut you like a feesh. Well, go go for Keith first, THEN attack you. ^_~ ~_^

Overall, a great piece of work. ^^ I look forward to the next chappie. Let's hope it'll turn out okies. :D

~Leona

I really liked this new chapter, but at what point are you going to give poor Ryou some relief. I mean i know Bakura is an ass but let him be at least slightly romantic, please....for me.

I really liked this new chapter, but at what point are you going to give poor Ryou some relief. I mean i know Bakura is an ass but let him be at least slightly romantic, please....for me.

YAY!!!
Excellent chapter!!!
Lol! Ryou is so cute! I love what he's doing to Bakura now hehehe!
And Uh Oh! Keith got out! I wonder whats going to happen there...
OH! And Duke teaching Malik how to fight!! Thats going to be FUN!!!! I cant wait to see that!!!
Please update again soonies huni!!!
Much Luv
Debs xxx