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for The Viking Brothers

by ChibiMisu

person Camille
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope Bakura opens his eyes about Ryou. I'll send one of the three dead pets, or all three to teach him a lesson! Your three stories were funny! I love the underlying theme of Marik killing them all by accident. Poor guy! He could never get a break. Update soon!
person Deb
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lmao! This was an awesome chapter huni!!
Loved the stories at the end! Marik the slaughterer of wildlife creatures lmao!
The master plan between marik, malik and ryou is kicking off nicely then hehehe!
I cant wait to see more of that!
Yugi jumping into bed with Jou and Seto was so great lol! Haha! I loved that!
Please update again soonies hun!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person Shinigami24
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*grins* Aww! How cute! *whistles* I dunno who was the most tramatized, Mokuba or Ryou! *shakes head* I can see why Marik has issues! But I don't like Yami, Marik and Bakura's father at all! Nope, not even a little bit! Cuz he seems so cold, and I cannot see why he hurt his wife with all of his sleeping around! It's ed aed aery!ery! And while it might have been okay back then, it's not okay today! If Yami's mother was a mo wom woman, she could get a divorce!
person Elle-Fate2x1
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what's going to happen! The little stories were funny, I felt sorry for marik in the first one though. Can't wait until the next chapter and how much Marik, Malik and Ryou irritate Bakura
person Shinigami24
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*winces* I'm staying out of that one! But... this plan better work! Anyway, I don't want to be in the middle of it, when Bakura explodes! *hides* Poor Duke! Hope he'll be okay! What'll happen with Yami and will he get the answers he's looking for? Cuz it seems like there are more family secrets out t...
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person Bealmira
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* I have a stray cat named Smokey... Now, what are the chances of that? *grins* Probably really high considering how un-original us people are.

Anyway, this chapter rocked! I feel soooo sorry for Tristan and Duke (but more for Tristan. The poor boy just wants to be with his love!!) I've just recently found your fic but I just couldn't wait until I finished reading to comment on it. You're amazing! I just love the idea of a Viking Marik, it just sorta.... fits. *purrs* I'll probably review more before I finish reading your 32 chapters, (that's a lot!! @_@) so I hope you keep it up!!
person Pwetty Blood
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to enjoy the sub-plot involving Bakura and Ryou's relationship a lot more than the main story!!! *giggles* I wonder if Malik's plan will work... Whatever the case, I'm sure that it will be most interesting... I especially loved the scene where Malik and Marik were discussing the 'master plan'. Actually, any time that the two of them or anyone else talks about their love lives is hilarious. Getting Ryou involved was even better!! I'll bet he's even greater in bed when he's drunk!
person letainajup
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL! This chapter is great! I haven't laughed as much since the bunny chapter (still the funniest thing yet)! Poor Duke, he goes through as much crap as Ryou does! :( But that what makes this story as wonderful as it is! I wo if if Keith is going back to Pegasus? Oooo the plot thickens! Thanks for updating so quickly, I'm looking forward to see how Bakura acts seeing Marik with both Malik and Ryou! TTFN!
person Camille
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just saw Alien Vs. Predator. Is that going to rival Marik vs. Bakura? I see lots of problems here! HEHEEHEHEH!!
person Nikkayla-san
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-giggles hysterically- eheheheehheeheheheh EHEHEHEEH I SAY! That was the funniest thing ^^ Marik's favourite pass-time is to piss Bakura off. ha, that is rich. and I like it! Bakura's a bitch :) but he still rocks. Okay, i really sho't h't have read this, now i won't be able to think straight for my assignment.... oh well, too fucking bad. :) i can't wait for the next chapter! this story really rocks -nod- keep up the good work! and keith had better die soon -growl- or i'll do it for you :) bai!