rate_review Reviews

I really love this story it's one of the best things I read but it says you have up to chapter 41 now but my computer only registers chapter 39 is there a way you can e-mail me the other two chapters or something I really want to read this PLEASE

OMG!!! Baby Bakura is sooo cute! I'd love to hear more about him and his brothers whwen they were young *hint hint, nudge nudge* :)

Your storyline is good, the whole thing well written, and the characters well doveloped as a whole, especially the transition of the yamis from nasty to nice (this is so often rushed in other fan fictions that is was definatly necessary to point this out!)

Hoping to hear more soon,

Gantaeno.
(and a koala @*0*@ :). )

Simply amazing. When I came to check up on this after a few months of not looking at anything I was so delighted to see so many more things to read. And NOW a sequel too!!! *is joyous* Something tells me I won't be sleeping as early as I hoped but I don't care! Good fic to read!

i was laughing so hard with the stories you wrote about smockey anad the pineapple kinng and so forth and the part with yuigi in the room and the box that said here liyes smokey and all the others and i do hope ryou get to be happy as well and that bakura stops being sch a damn prick and a stubborn jackass and just adnmitt his feelings for ryou so i loved it and it was funny sad the sex scenes where really good and the malik and marik scenes are hillarius specially in the beginning when malik goes after marik with the broom it was sofunny and i hope you make the sequel soon

o god thankyou for not wrining a lemon with kieth i absolutely hate him. i review more after i finish the wholt story iys really really good so far

That was a great story! though... I do wish that Bakura would actually tell Ryou that he loved him. *sighs* I feel so sorry for him. >.<;;;;

Yay!!! I can't believe that you finished this!!! ^___^ I loved this fic soooo much, and I can't wait to read the sequel!!! Thank you for a wonderful story, and keep up th good work!!! Ja ne!!!

I hope that in the follow up ryou will get married to bakura.

Ryou: yeah what about my wedding

Bakura: shut up!

Ryou: yes master

any way loved the story good luck with the follow up. ^___^

Wow. When I first saw the summary, I was skeptical, but I decided to give it a try. One chapter, and I was HOOKED. This is by far one of the best fics I have ever read. It's very creative and the character development is very well done. The only thing I have to complain about is the condition in which you left Ryou and Bakura's relationship. It really depressed me seeing everyone happy and married, and Ryou off all by himself, painfully in love with someone who did not love him back. ::cries:: I really hope that you add another chapter or two or do a sequel to resolve things between Ryou and Bakura because just leaving them like that is too depressing. But other than that and me and my obsession with happy endings (especially where Ryou is concerned) it is by far an excellent fic and worthy of endless praise. ^_^

Yay I finally finished this ficcy!! Though I'm kinda sad to see it end, but there's always the sequel. ^_^
Anywho, I loved this soooooo much; very creative, original, and most of all ENJOYABLE!!! I also liked
the bonus stories, my fave was the Pineapple one. lol that was classic. You are definetly one of my new
fave authors, and I am so putting this fic in my Recommended Reading section. Kepp up the great work
'cause you certainly have a gift.

Always,
Kina aka AutumnRose >^.^<