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for A Domino Effect

by soracia

person Amarin
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh... Hot, hot, hot, *hot*! A dozen cold showers could not cool me off after those two chapters. I have steam coming out of my ears, girl! Please tell me it won't take three months for another chapter to come out?
person Arainaina
schedule March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting good job hope to read the next chapter soon
person Imouto-chan
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey hey hey!! ^_~ Imouto-chan here and I just finished the second part! Whoot! *gives V-sign* That was great!

And yep, your lemon skillz are awesomeness-incarnate Nee-chan! Lol, despite the fact that this was mostly just for the smut, rather than some exceptionally hilarious reference in later chapters... Talk to me, I think I have an idea for much later in the story... and no, it doesn't involve Honda dragging Ryuugi into thve bve by the hair... ^^;

So when are those other promised GW-smut stories coming? *pokes Nee-chan* Anyway, talk to you later. Hope your days are less stress-filled than mine! *hugs*

-Imouto-chan
person Becky
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Jesus Christ... That is the fucking *hottest* thing I have EVER read! Damn, you need to write more of this.

x.Becky.x
person Santurion
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! *blinks* Wow! I don't have any words! That was awesome!!!
person DarkQueen
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FUCK! That was so good! I just want My Dragon master and his Puppy together, please!
Update soon...can't really wait long!
LATER...
person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RD:hey there great ficcy though i wish u could have made yugi a little more of wildcat when it came to situations like that u know him being the calm innocent type normally then when he got together with Yami go more wild then what anyone thought possible and as for kaibe nitwit i swear having someone to love isnt weakness i mean look at yugi he fought against pegasas to save the kaiba bros and his grandpa and became king of games and save the world in the process so as u can see love is not a weakness having a heart proves yur more stronger really well gtg now TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^__~
person ACIDBURN
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Nicely wrote. Nto uto understand it has a nice flow to it. I hope you update soon. You got my two fav pairs in this Ryou and Bakura ans Yami and Yugi.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: Oh, holy HELL that was hot!!
DD: I wanna see a little Tris/Otogi action!! PLEASE?!?!?!?!?!!?
YD: ME too!!!!!
person Luna Riddle
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwww first the two hottest of the pack, then the adorable ones, and i was hoping seto would give in, it's so obvious tha seto likes joey in this one, so it's time to wait....not for very long i hope...to see what will happen next