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for Strip Dueling

by kerrysaulters

person What's dry when it goes in, and wet when it comes out?
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!! CUTENESS!!!
person Paradiseboy
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! I love Bakura/Malik pairings(yami or not).Just a few minor typos but other than that, this is flawless.Keep writing!
person Snork
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OmR. Ive actually read this several time and i only JUST realised it was actually Marik.. as in hikari marik. From now on i think i'll make sure i always read the little descritpions before hand (i never do) Not that i didnt like it as Y.marik.. but y'know ^_^
Love this fic. Heehee every friday.
Oh oh! Chapter 2? With Ryou and Y.Marik too..?? You know you want too
person Len
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So. hot. Mmm.. *re-reads*
person ...
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...*grins*.....hot hot hot.....but....isnt malik the hikari and marik is the yami?.......oh well!^^......awesome one-shot!....*hugs*.....Ja!
person Belle
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. I only have one problem with it..Bakuras eyes arent blue dearie, they're brown. Easy mistake, at least you didnt say red, right! lol. Other than that it was great. I highly enjoyed it! Keep writing good stuff like this. lol.
person Anon
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very well done! I like the idea-I should try that! ;)
person Yaky
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o_o Hmmm...don't know how the hell I missed this?!? But, it's great an absolute delight!
person SlaveUke101
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
I liked 'Strip Dueling'...it's one of those 'short but good' fics. I laughed pretty hard at some of the parts...yeah, it was kinda funny. Mmm-mmm keep up the good work, kid, it's all good.
-A random fan.
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^______^ Now this is the type of dueling the show should focus on, LoL. I like it, *grins* I say you also write what Malik & Ryou are up to *nods eagerly* Nice job!!
~YamiRynEnjeru