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for The Price to Pay

by hollyberry

person dragonkitty
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea, continue this could be reallly good.! I like it.
person Bambi
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hott, hott, HOTT!! Very good, you said this was your first fic? Looks pretty good to me ^_^ But is there going to be some...Bakura action in there somewhere? Just an opinion, great job.

~Bambs