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for The Price to Pay

by hollyberry

person Ka-chan of Yaoi
schedule April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!! I must make you update...?? What will it take!

Please update! So yes, continue! Good story! Very good!
person SweetMisery
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue

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(^.^)
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person inoaheartilly
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh,could you continue this storyline please?
person inoaheartilly
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh,could you continue this storyline please?
person Lime
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAii!!!! thats was so cool ^.~ please write more, although.. ive heard the name Yaten Bakura before? is it from Hato Chiisai's fics?
person YamiJou
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YESH CONTINUE THIS STORYLIIIIIIIINE!!!!!!
person spiderweb
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That wike.ike...HOT!!! Continue with the storyline!!! I wanna see if Yaten will accept Malik--Oh yeah, loved the lemon part! ^-^ Keep it up!
person Luna Riddle
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
a one shot eh? didn't end that way! it's screaming more parts! i wanna see how malik will deal with ryou's father, since he loves him and all! so continue this thing soon! me want more more more!
person SlaveUke101
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hellooo friend.
Let's think...should you continue this fic...? *Shouts* YES DUH OF COURSE YOU SHOULD IT ROCKS!!! *Ahem* ANYWAY...good job on the fic it's one of the tops in my opinion! *Thumbs up*.
person Isabel
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was sooo sweet! Please continue this story! ^_^