rate_review Reviews

OHHHHH.............i loved it. I want more but there isn't any more now. Sigh. I keep thinking what will become of Joey, what about Tristan, what about Kaiba, and what's going on with Yami and Yugi. Well I guess i'm just gonna have to find out. OH well can't wait.

-glompage- this chap kicked ass! i can't wait to read the next one! ^-^ ~leaf~

^.~ update soon, ok? I totally love htis fic!! ^_____^ You HAVE to update it soon!!

ooooohhhhhhhhh

this is nice

please update soon!!!!

DD: I don't like where this is going.
YD: Me either...I get the distinct impression Tris is gonna get hurt.
DD: As much as I like to soey oey and Seto together...
YD: Please don't leave Tris out in the lurch on this one.
DD: Please?

First off let me say I'm really loving this story. Keep up the good work!
Second, don't apoligize for the length of the chapters. I love the good long meaty chapters. It means you're telling a story not trying to get to thd ofd of it. Hope to see more long meaty chapters soon. A meaty Seto and/or Jou would be nice too :-)
Akuchan

Me: wow, that chapter was great so far
Yami: how'd u know its the only chapter???
Me: CHECK FIRST BEFORE REVIEWING, DUH! *hits Yami*
Yami: HEY, I WAS JUST CURIOUS!!!
Me: well, don't ask stupid questions!!!
Yami: IT WASN'T STUPID! IT WAS SMART!!!
Me: *laughs* that was smart? yea, right.
Yami: IT WAS SMART KOI!!!
Me: *snicker* whatever, u should check in the other comp. just in case
Yami: *growls and leaves room*
Me: forget about my koi, sh alw always likes this. Anywayz, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! THIS STORY IS GETTING GOOD!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE OK??? CONTINUE!!! *runs after Yami*

DD: That ROCKED!!
YD: Yeah...it was a little long tho...you coulda broken it into a couple of chapters.
DD: You know...I think Joey and Tris need each other.
YD: Yep.
DD: Oh...just one little thing...and I only picked up on it because I love Tris so much...there's only one i in Tristan.
YD: I can't wait to read more.
DD: Me either!!!!!

I really like the start of this story so far. I shall continue reading it...^_^ please update soon.

I like were this is going....keep it up!!