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for So In Love With Two

by Shakirah

person leaf zelindor
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
>.>.....<.<.......-sporks tristan probably for the second time- he's a bastard...-lol- anyway i loved the chap, Yami's thickness was really cute and i really like the fact that even though Seot Jot Joey drunk he didn't have sex with him,if you ask me that speaks a ton in itself! ~Leaf~
person ACIDBURN AKA ACIDFLOWER
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved this part. Yes, Aibou.” They exchanged a look, fire burning between them. I’m surprised Yami hasn’t sent me home so he can take him right now. How the Hell did he hold out so long? Tristan should take notes. HAHHAH THAT WAS KICK ASS!!! YOU GO HON! THIS FIC ROCKS SO MUCH!
person leaf zelindor
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEEEEE i loved this omg! it kicked so much ass!!!! awe..does Ryou like Tristan? XD it's cute ^_^ anyway loved the chap, can't wait for more! ^_^ ~leaf~
person Halowing4
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! It's like a steamy soap opera with all of the couples,the misunderstandings, miscommunications,and the jelousy. The lemon scere sre so hot. Finally a hot scene between Seto and Joey in chapter 5. I never knew sticky cinnamon buns could be so sexy. Can't wait for more.
person Evil Windstar
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
as seto was shamelessy flirting with joey, all i could keep thinking was "joey, ur so pathetic." maybe he is but maybe that adds on to his cuteness. ^_^; luv the scene between yugi and malik. "u blond headed bitch". hah-hah. oh god i cracked up when i read that. hee-hee i really can't see ever-so-gentle yugi like that. but we all have our moments of impending explosion and bitchness, i would know. luv ur fic!!! original in a way that it isn't but it's still orginal... (did that make any sense?... i didn't think so.) please update soon!! onward to read the next chapter weeeeeeee!!!
person dragonkitty
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! I love this story! ^_____^ It's soooo good. everytime you update i'm like Yay you updated. But why the torture? WHY!?
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
<< LOL <---I like those eyes. Anyways How do you write such long chapters so fast...<< I wish I could write such long chapters so fast lucky you.
I love this fic so much plus you got my babies in it ^_~. Anyways update like you've been doing. Great job. and ty for the email. ^_^

Your fanl Jenn aka ACIDFLOWER
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what happen? ok my review didn't show up kicks review box. I was saying great update. How do you write such long chapters so fast? I wish I could.
I love this fic. and my babies are in it muchs it better. Hugs Yami and Yugi. anyways update soon just loving this. Thank you for the email ^^

Your fan Acidflower
person Kschur32
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. The sticky bun thing was fun. Tristian should feel bad bacause he was close enought to forcing Joey that trust could be hurt. Also in this chapter and the last Tristan is treating Joey like a toy not a person. At least it reads that ay. Any way great chapter. Look forward to the next one.
person Robbin Zombie
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*kicks Tristan aside* GO AWAY! YOU AREN'T READY FOR A RELATIONSHIP! At least not with Joey. And Seto ish so sexy... Joey would have to be mad to go for Tristan if he and Seto hooked up.