rate_review Reviews

I really like the epilogue. It closed up so many things that were going on in the story and I do like how you made Tea and Mai ending up toge. Y. You know, I'd like to see a sequel to this story if there is one possible in the future...^_^

WEEEEEE it rules i loved it very nice indeed ^___^ perfect ending ^_^ write more fun seto/jou stories hehe

Saku-chan

*cries a river* It's gone! It's done! boo-hoo... Well it had to come sooner of later right? Later would have been nicer. AWSOME FIC!! I did notice in the second to last chapter or more appropriately the chapter before the epilouge some of the things Joey and Seto said were from songs... did you mean it that way? Like one was from I think a Phil Colins song I died in arms tonight then there was Savage Garden fall asleep inside of you and something from Evanescence, maybe more. Am I right? Or do I know too many songs? Oh and lastly AWSOME FIC! ^_^ I look forward to more from you. Perhaps a TristanxSeto...*wink wink*
Just one more thing... the Seto/Joey when they got together was the sweetest bit of sugar I ever read! I LOVE YOU!!!

Oh man, the conversation between Kaiba and Tristan in Epi Epilogue was just so... *shudder* Sorry, I just don't favor these two together. Initial reon won was EwEwEwEwwwwww!!!!! If I was a gay guy sporting a hard-on, it would've died the instant I read what these two had just conversed with each other, it was that bad.

But seriously, on the whole the story was just too emotional and I find it sometimes kind of hard to believe that all those heavy duty talks about love, emotions, betrayal and psychological mumbo-jumbo had been said out loud by teenagers in high school (and Mokuba?!) with each of them talking like an experienced psychiatrist...or something equivalent to that. I find it even more disturbing when more than half of these talks have been produced by Joey Wheeler himself who had been known as an insensitive buffoon with a big-fat mouth (despite that, I still adore the Puppy *hugs*).

Overall, it may be a little too emotional and angsty for me (since I'm not the emotional and angsty kind) but I read it up anyway because I want to know what happens next. There's that suspense that I rarely have when reading a good story and considering that this isn't a mystery whatsoever, it proves that it's a damn good story to me. There are insecurities living alive inside us that you have portrayed nicely into words in the story, something that I'll never be able to do in a long time coming. Mistaking the variations of love for certain individuals, the misunderstood feelings and thinkings, the meddlings of past history with the present situation...you have incorporated it well into your story. It succeeded in making me to 'want' to read your story. Congratulations for managing to do so.

And congratulations for finally finishing up your story. Hope to see more Yu-Gi-Oh stories pop up from you.

MC Dirty D, u figured me out about the song lyrics. I was wondering if anyone would notice! Actually there were at least two more I could think of off hand, "i bet you're hard to getr" r" is from a Matchbox Twenty song, and "I'll never get over you getting over me" is a song by Selena. SO cool you caught that! Thanks for reading my story!

This was one of the BEST stories I have ever read!! I loved it! Good Luck in the future! :)

YD: GODS! Bakura is SOOOOOOOO funny!!
DD: *pout* It's over.
YD: But it ended good.
DD: Hot lemons all around...yummy!!
YD: We enjoyed this so much!!
DD: Good job!!

Sorry I mean like more fics!

AWE!!!! i wanna read the epilogue!!!! XD i loved this fic! it was awesome from beginning to end! ~Leaf~

YD: Okay...didn't really expect THAT!
DD: Loved it though.
YD: I have to say one thing...Bakura's wrong. W-R-O-N-G! You CAN be in love with more than one person at a time.
DD: *raises hand* Case in point.
YD: Having said that...can't wait for the epilogue!