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I'm not sure if I've reviewed this story before or not but I wanted to let you know how much I love it. So just incase I'm gonna review again :D I read this a long time ago and I still think about it and still talk about it all of the time. It's influenced how I write and how I think about the characters. I wanted to let you know how much of an impact this story had on me. Thank you for writing it.

This was one of the BEST stories I have ever read anywhere. The ending was cool...noone died or got hurt...basically Im one of those happy ending ppl so plz write more of those.

That took me three fucking days to read... it was like a movie!!! A really really good movie though!

hey good story but needs the spelling checked but otherwise VERY good

Absolutely wonderful. No more needs to be stated. it was an absolutely wonderful story adn I hope even more like it appear from you.

Yay! That was so great. I liked all the characterizations, and the prose was incredible. You might want to run the fic back through spell check though. You had quite a few typo errors that would be caught by it.Some wouldn't though...
I loved how i could practically here all the characters voices in this fic, i kept hearing Dan Green say all of Yami's lines in the pompous (sp?) pharoah voice he has. Mokuba was such a scheemer too! You had me rolling on the floor with some of his antics.
I also liked that you used the dub names... i like the dub(hides from rabid fangirls out for blood) i also like the japanese too, better story.
One thing i really want to commend you on though is keeping Seto the complete asshole he is!!! Brillant, i don't know how many fics i've stopped reading because seto stopped being, well, HIM! In both the dub and jap, no matter what happens and how much progress yugi seems to make in opening him up, Kaiba turns around and says something to prove what an unrepentant asshole he really is! I love it! Thanks for keeping that quality!
I look forward to reading more of your work!
Hikaru!

*claps* amazing! best two am read ever!!!!

What an awesome story! What a nail-biter! I honestly couldn't figure out which way Joey was leaning from one chapter to the next. Great wrap-up, I do SO adore a nice LONG read. I managed to devour this over 2 days time, but really didn't leave time for much else! The characterization is spot on, and IMHO, you write the best Joey EVER, hands down. Seto was never OOC, which is a very hard thing to do. It's not easy to show the CEO's more human side without turning him into a total ball of sap. A very fine line to walk, and you did it wonderfully. And Bakura...OMG I think I must have spewed coffee all over my monitor at pretty much everything that came out of his mouth. Funny, vulgar, insightful, offensive, whatever...Bakura somehow manages to get everyone's attention in the end. Oh, and how could I forget the AAAAAAAAANGST!!! God, I love angst! Thank you thank thank you for all the gut-wrenching, mind-boggling boy-angst! You know any fic's a winner if it makes you yell at the monitor screen like you're watching a bad horror flick! "No, don't do that you idiot, Tristan really DOES love you!" "Joey! What the hell were you thinking?" "Oh for god's sake, Yugi, just tell him already!!" Hee. I'm just glad I wasn't doing any reading of this is a public place. I might have gotten some pretty strange glances... Anyway, I'm looking forward to reading more of your stuff, thanks for the great read, and keep up the good work!

For some reason I have overlooked this story of yours. Therefore I just had the pleasure to read all pages from start to finish without having to wait for an update. It was a great emotional roller coaster ride. Wonderful story!! Please update "Beauty" soon. KTLGC!

i lllllllllllllooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeedddddddddddddddddddddddddd this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!