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OOH...INTERESTING, VERY INTERESTING.....I THINK YA GOT THE MAKINGS OF A GRATE STORY HERE, AND I REALLY HOPE THAT YOU'LL BE ADDING MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY REALLY REALLY SOON TOO....ANYHOO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK O.K.

I liked this story very much. I had trouble believing the whole father thing, yet, who cares, I liked the rest. Thanks for the monster/Yugi story.

update update.... its dark....i want to see what happens

(SAD) THE ONLY WORDS I CAN WRITE.

Strange story. But I liked it. Great writing . This shows the promise of a really great longer story with Yugi and the Dark Magician and Yami too I hope. What's it going to be like when Yugi wakes up and what about when they're out of the Kaiba's game? Yami did the the Dark Magician to Look after Yugi not just protect him. Doesn't the Dark Magician have to destroy the letter in the realld ald as well. I am glad that Yami took the bad memories from Yugi. But what if he didn't do it right or they started to come back some because he father lied and comes after him. I'd like to see the Dark Magician and/or Yamigo up against guy guy. I sure hope you plan to continue this story. It has such potential! I haven't seen a Yugi/Dark Magician before and I think it looks like you might manage to pull this pairing off realisticaly or maybe it'll be a Yugi/Dark Magician/Yami story. It kind of seemed like the Dark Magician and Yami may have had something going at one time and possibly still do. Please let me know if you continue this story. I'd love to see more. Sorry if I'm rambling too much but every once in a long while I'll find a story that deserves rambling. Instead of my usual short reviews. This isn't usually the type of story I read but I really liked it. I'll definitely be back to see if there's more soon. Great Work!

You have suscessfully twisted the purest anime to cum along in years! Kudos for you! This was a very nice teaser yaoi fiction.

Yes give me the tittie pinching fettish. I think it's er... romantic. Yes romanti... awww screw it, I just thought it was kinky. Yes I am the one nd tnd this particular story. If it weren't for me, you guys wouldn't be reading this wonderful story. Thanks for writing it for us almighty Queen Deanna. However you are not that almighty because I'm the Great and Wonderful Drunken Goddess Gatomonangewomon. Bow before my almighty powers.

Yes bow now- GATO