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April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I feel so sorry for the two boys. Poor Yami and Yugi. It would be hard to find something out like that. I don't know if anyone could cope with it that well. I can't wait to see where you take this story. Very interesting. Love how you are portraying it so far. Keep up the awesome work .
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ack! NO! You can't split them up! It's just wrong!!!!
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know everone is saing that this is sad but I get a kick out of it it's funny as hell to me. But I think it would have ben funnyer if they hade gon all the way and then yugi found out about him and yami being brother's.
But thenagen that's just me......Yes I know I'm some people that read this will think I'm mean......and to that I say thank you =^_^= I know I am.
But thenagen that's just me......Yes I know I'm some people that read this will think I'm mean......and to that I say thank you =^_^= I know I am.
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG....so mean! They still have t tog together! They just have to!
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh... no! Yuugi... Yami... Poor Yami...
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April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh... no! Yuugi... Yami... Poor Yami...
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March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very nice. I have been reading this from start to finish in one sitting. I am totally addicted but I feel bad at how this may play out. I mean both boys areng tng to take the truth very badly. I like the writing style and the story is gut wrenching in places. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: *Peeks from behind hands* Is it over yet?
Yumi: Wow I never thought there'd be a...lime in here
Yuji: I thought it was innocent fun
Yumi: Nope! Two twin brother's just gave eachother...well technically one brother gave the other a blowjob and the other gave the brother a handjob
Yuji: Yugi's lost some of his innocence
Yumi: He isll cll cute
Yuji: I want to know what happens
Yumi: UPDATE!!
Yumi: Wow I never thought there'd be a...lime in here
Yuji: I thought it was innocent fun
Yumi: Nope! Two twin brother's just gave eachother...well technically one brother gave the other a blowjob and the other gave the brother a handjob
Yuji: Yugi's lost some of his innocence
Yumi: He isll cll cute
Yuji: I want to know what happens
Yumi: UPDATE!!
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March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i all all good, take your time ^_^ very cute chap, i will love to see more when you get it out ^_^ ~Leaf~
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: I so much hope their love stays!
Yumi: I just want to see what happens.
Yuji: MORE!! PLEASE!!
Yumi: UPDATE!!
Yumi: I just want to see what happens.
Yuji: MORE!! PLEASE!!
Yumi: UPDATE!!