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for Original Sin

by Borath

person Minako
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooooooooh. i really like it so far and i hope u update it soon. U seem to hoave a talent. I was just wondering if this was a yaoi fic at all? U can't really tell so far.
person Kasota
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far, you've got me interested. Update soon ^^
person Yuki KIKI
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wai! So good! Upadate Now!!!
person DKD
schedule January 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Freaky and dark but good.Must finish now. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even if I like Yami alot I like him getting hurt LOL maybe I'm sick This is off to a great start I really like to see this go on. And see what bakura has in mind ^_^
person LonelyFox
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it! The idea of torturing Yami is very, very nice^^ KILL HIM! AHAHAHAHAHA!!!