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for Sleeping

by Oneida

person alostblackcat
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wahhhhh

T_T

that was so sad!!!

it was a great story but so sad...

mew

person DIXIE
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THE STORY
IT WAS A REAL TEAR JERK BUT I GIVE IT A TEN
DO YOU LIVE IN ONEIDA, TENNESSEE
I GREW UP THERE AND I WAS JUST WONDERING

THANKS AGAIN FOR THE SAD BUT TERRIFIC STORY
person KC
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was ok i guess. Mokuba died in a car accident, Jou and kaiba make love for awhile. Are you going 2 continue??? Please say that you will!!! Can't wait for more!!! continue 2 update and don't wait 2 long 2 update ok??? continue!!!
person YamiJou
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O....MY....RA! *sobs uncontrollably* that is sooo sad... I feel sorry for seto and especially Jou cause he didnt know what hit him...
person Joey Fanatic
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOWEE! This is really amazing story . . . I loved it! Just the idea of Seto commiting suicide and taking Joey with him . . . it's enough to bury me under a mountain of plotbunnies . . . don't worry, though, I'll keep them to myself. You get first credit! This was amazing!

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