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Sniff sniff... Sappy and heartbreaking! Please dont just make this a one shot! I need to read more about this! UPDATE!!!!!

oh my fucking god.... that was so... sad. shit I am actually crying.. I never cry.

;_; A very intense and grippling fic. I feel somewhat ashamed at enjoying the pure Angst and grief of it so much, really. I love the way you wrote Seto and Jou though, both struck me as very in-character. (I think that there's a good chance indeed that Seto wouldn't really feel up to living anymore after Mokuba would have passed away, not even with Joey at his side [or should that be 'feet'? ~.^ Sorry, lame dog-joke]). Your style of writing drage ree reader very much into the story, with a great choice of words and (near) impeccable grammar. (You keep writing [Setos'] and [Jous'] when you denote possession, instead of putting the apostrophe before the s ([Seto's] and [Jou's]) as is usual, but aside from that, it's perfect. [At least, I thought so. ^^;]). I also like the arrangements Seto made and the way he had planned it all out, down to a letter to Jou's friends. It's almost scary (no, wait, it *did* scare me) how he keeps being so organized and orderly while planning a ... double suicide? It's not quite murder I think (well, at least Seto might not think of it that way. More li'Jou'Jou is mine, so when I go, he goes too'.)
I hope you'll write many more fics (if possible happy ones, though if this one's any indication, your Angsty ones will be great too. ^_^)

awe -sniffles- that was sad..and very well written..
~Leaf~

*sniff sniff* You're mean and evil... *tear* But god, do I love ya.

Genius. I love this idea. Simply adore it. That was amazing.

If I ever grow up I want to be just like you. . . . . . . . OMG. . . . .ummm. . .just wow, your writing is amazing, you have such imagery in your writing it's . . . .just wow.looklook at me I am speechless. . . .keep up the BEAUTIFUL work!!!

poor joey and seto! This was a good fic! *hugs joey*

WHOA! That's twisted.

But... at least Jounouchi died happy... *gets shot* X_O

OMFG! That was absolutely splendid! You cannot imagine, just how much I enjoyed reading this. It was breath taking, so enthralling, absorbing and captivating! I cannot begin to express how much I love this. My favorite couple, and dark; what more can I ask for? This has become my favorite! Excellent, outstanding job!!!
LATER...