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OMG how sad... Meanie Seto!!! how dare you kill my... I mean your puppy...

Your fic reminds me of the wreck I had back in May. My two year old niece was in the back seat when a car rearened us with me driving. I don't blame myself for the wreck but I miss her so much. I was there at her birth and at her side when my sister had to make the choice to let her go. I really did like your fic. I hope others do as well.
GarnetStar

It's so sad... sobs... mokuba is so cute... poor seto...

So Kawaii, Poor Sato,Poor Mokuba,T.T....at the end....did that mean that drink made them sleep and die? or was that a figure of speech? -sweatdrop-

I am confused is Seto and Jou dead or is he just plain old sleeping@_@ it was good anyway+_+

Wow... nice. I like it, a lot. Mokuba death fics... yay! Teh angst... *droolpurr*

whoa..... that was goood. kinda of romatic in a werid sort of way. poor jou and seto T.T. good

Oh, this was really sad. That's why I usually don't read stories that have character deaths of stuff like that in them.
But this is really good, from the stylistic point of view. I mean... all those little things that you mention, that have ... like a double meaning... and we expect them to be the obvious, but in fact... they're not. Like Seto calling Jou Katsuya, and there's two reasons why he'd ever do that and we just assume it's cause he's horny, or you mention the tube is empty and they don't need it anymore, or the whole orgasms... paraphrased as coming to an end...
As I said. REALLY good!!!

sooooooooooo sad

OMFG that was so twisted and sad but a very good story i was crying so head at when it hit me that seto had poisned Joey and then him slfe and than to find out poor Mokuba was dead wow i'm still crying as i write this ( Seto walks up behind me) Seto: Hey what they Holy ra iyou killed me Joey and my borther! ( runs off Crying) got to go he's haveing a cadagory 5 fit got to find him befor he blows a mine vain in his head ( runs off looking for Seto)