AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for A Very Strange Sleepover

by TheTubstar

person TokyoYami
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice Fic yet.....where did all the other chapters go?? please continue with this story
person Warrick
schedule January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Try and improve your ing ing style. You tend to shorten words often, and the layout could be more.....reable.
person DarkQueen
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! This is good, I really like the change!
Great job, please continue soon!
LATER...
person silent angel
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this was good keep going wai wait for the next chappie
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please keep going with this I read the last chapters that you wrote but then it was gone PLEASE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE? YOU MUST GO ON WITH THE STORY DON'T STOP YOU CAN'T HUGS Please Update this story or eles i will cry!

Yugi:Trust me she means it
Rebecca:Ya don't upset her please
Yugi and Rebecca:UPDATE UPDATE oh did we meation UPDATE ^_^
person InuLover421
schedule June 5, 0000 at 12:00 AM
I love your story- 'Only In Dreams' But I didn't realize that you had also written 'Bus Stop Fairytale' It is one of my ALL TIME favorite stories, and I've read ALOT of stories.