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for Gone

by Cherreh

person darkpharaoh04
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write the next chapter please!!!! This has to have a happy ending for yami and yugi!! please update soon. I love you Yami or should I say Pharaoh Atemu..... ^_^
person Paulina
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm near to cry it's impresive up date soon please
person Silentia
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay... a review... First of all... my English sucks (being a lazy student didn´t do me any good)...
Anyways... I like your stro rea read this plot in other stories, but I like it with the goodbye letter... I really do hope that you´ll update soon!
For I´m curious how much time will pass before Yugi forgives Yami and how they´ll come together. One last thing... Even without a Beta you could still read over your chapters once so that you won´t have silly tipping mistakes (Did I say that my English sucks??)
Well, bye Silentia
person ME!
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS AWESOME AND ONLY ONE CHAPTER? OH YOU'VE SO GOT TO UPDATE SOON. AND YOU KNOW WHAT WOULD BE SUPER COOL, MY BIRTHDAY IS ON NEXT MONDAY AND IT WOULD BE AN AWESOME GIFT IF THERE WAS AN UPDATE BY THEN. YOU MAY NOT KNOW ME BECAUSE I DON'T ALWAYS USE THE SAME NAME, BUT I AM A LOYAL FAN AND LOVE STORSTORIES. WELL ANYWAY THINK ABOUT IT, BUT UPDATE SOON ANYWAY.
person Jag
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is so good! Please update soon, I've gotta know what happens next.
person suppi-chan
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaww... poor Yami... well... it's what he deserves for bein' such an ass!! >_< Continue! ^_~
person chi
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, wicked
pls pls pls pls update soon
person Kinnomorri
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!! When you do, email me.
person Chibi-inu
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hm... I think I remember this or sumthin' like it... on mm.org or ff.net... ^^; How dare you cut it off there?! You'd better continue right now, missy!
person Bakes
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WWWOOOOOOOWWWWWW!!! I like, I like, I like. I've read many stories like that Yami and co. ingoring Yugi, Yugi leaves etc etc. I'm very interested in seeing were you take this story.

I love it so far, keep writing and update soon please ^_^