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WOW can you say OOC!! Yami even Seto is outrageous OOC

umm... what happened to chapter 10?

NNNOOOOOO DO NOT BREAT YUGI AND SETO UP DONT THIS IS THE FIRST YUGI SETO STORY I HAVE LIKED DONT DO IT!!!!!!

That's so sweet, yet heartbreaking. You know, from all the other storiesve rve read concerning Yami, Yugi, and Seto, They all eventually learn to love each other. Maybe Seto should fall in love with Yami's courage and fiery spirit, as well as his pure love of Yugi that rivals Seto's own. How could Seto not admire those? I'm say saying do it, I'm saying it would be cool. And it would make f hap happy ending instead of a bittersweet one. :)

Nooooo, don't stop, you must continue! Continue I say, Continuuuuuuuuuue! Onegai desu?

awwwwww that was so cute and sad I only hope that Yugi makes the right choice ^__^ awww update soon hon please awwww thsi story ROCKS I love it hon keep up the great work awwwww I hope it all works out sweetie ^___~

ah, i love this story. but i wanna c something happen between yugi and yami! haha anyway, this is great! keep up the good work! ^_^

Ok, I have a question. You aren't going to betray the readers and turn this into a Yami/Seto/Yugi are you? I don't have a problem with a 3-way pairing, it's just that I like Yami/Yugi pairings much more than Yami/Seto, ok, i hate that pairing, and Seto/Yugi, which is soooo not natural, I mean just look at their height differences, Yugi can grow up to be yami's height, since he is still young in the series, but there is no possibly hey he could reach beyond Seto's waist. anywho, the story is progressing smoothly and quite nicely, it's a good story.

YOU ARE SO RIGHT HON
FLUFF IS GOOD ^__~ YEAH FOR FLUFF
YEAH AND YUGI AND YAMI ARE TOGETHER AS WELL WHOOOOOOO
Great cahpter hon I can't wait to see MORE FLUFF WHOO FLUFF
awwwwwww Keep up the EXECLLENT WORK YOU ROCK HON ^__^
UPDATE SOON SWEETIE PLEASE

*Hands Shadow an award*

This fic is very deep. It’s sad to. But It holds a great point. I hate FUCKING HATE people that mistreat people like Yami in the real world. It makes me fucking sick.
I love that Yugi can look pass Yami’s ways. It’s not his fault he’s liket. At. AND FUCKING SETO KE TKE TO BURN THAT BITCHS ASS TO THE GROUND!!!!!!
In this fic. I feel for Yami and Yugi so much in this fic. This has to be one of the most touching fics I ever red. It really gets to your heart that sounded lame but you know what I mean I hope. I hope you will continue to write this fic. It is by far the best to me you’ve done. I like fics that are realistic. Hugs Yami. Poor Baby.

Well keep it up!