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by leah

person leaf zelindor
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
the joys of pink floyd.....ah...i love that song...i have a song fic (sucide one) planned for another song on the same album -grins- maybe i'll get it worked out and up here! good job! -sniffles- i liked it ~Leaf~
person Saku-chan
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god **bawls her eyes out** this is just so sad and touching **cries and sobs**
and its hard to make me cry even ur such a good writer keep up ur good work but my god that was just sad **cries** poor jou and poor seto **cryes hugging two plushies of jou and seto**
person u know who i am (sandy)
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS SAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SNIFFLE!!!!!!!!!! WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa but good!
person bakurasgirl
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was goodt yot you have to work on the grammar a little bit.
Sentences begin with capital letters. It's a little tricky to read because of the
spacing and lack of capitalization. That would make this much better.