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for Thrown to the Wolves

by KCBailey

person KC
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: FINALLY!!! ITS UPDATED!!!
Yami: rich and famous which Jou isn't
Me: shut up yami... i'm kinda rich but i go to a public school
Seto: *snorts* public school sucks!
me: watch what you say! You go to Domino High which might be a public school
Yami: *laughs* Domino High sucks
Seto: oh? Where does your hikari goes?
Me: DON'T TELL!!!
Yami: *smirk* John W. North High school
Me: *growls and leaves room*
Seto: *laughs* that's a sucky school
Yami: no its not!!! *looks around* where's hikari?
Seto: she left
Yami: damn! *leaves room to follow me Set Seto: well, um...continue!!! *runs after Yami & Me*
person Terry
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was such a cute chapter! Please update soon!
person zero-delta
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story please update soon!!
person Ryoanna
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, I must say, You have a very good imagination!
PLEEZE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!
Thankies,
Ryoanna ^_^
person Felidae
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ndon\don't feel bad about the cliffhanger, I mean, every author, and every story needs one, right? So, you just go on and enjoy yourself, just remember to continue sometime this year, 'kay?^^
person Polka Dot
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
? Did the restuarant not provide forks that Jou had syrup on his fingers. Strange. Anyway when do we get to the "Kaiba, take me I'm yours," chapter?
person leaf zelindor
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-murples- ^-^ cute cute ~Leaf~
person Kat
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh *sniffle* *pout* I want more! Lordy, the image of Jou licking syrup off of his fingers.... dayum. Well, at least I didn't say "sweeet!" Hopefully Kaiba will get to do that. *just realizes that she's gotta get sleep tonight, laughs hysterically*
person DarkQueen
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was actually pretty good. And it seems that the fic. is going to become one of the best.
Keep up the great work, and update soon!
LATER...
person KC
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think i reviewed this before but i'm not sure. ARAKI! U JUST GOT 2 CONTINUE THIS STORY! I LUV YOUR STORIES A LOT!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE AND DON'T STOP!!!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE!!!!!!!!