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by Mellybean

person DracOnyx
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was just fricking PERFECT! Gods, that was great. Bakura was dead on target with what he did. I do hope Yami wakes up soon . . . he needs to smack some sense into Yugi. And Tristan needs to get his head out of his ass about Otogi. But hey, great chapter! Enjoy your time in the States (you'ret upt up the road from me, actually) and can't wait for the next update.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh MY!! *giggles insanely* Go Kura!! yummy!!! Man, Yugi has gone all insane on everyone!! Poor Seto!! Poor Otogi!! *smacks Tris for being such an ass*

Have lot fun fun on your vacation, see you when I get back from mine (same week!!)

Lady Elfskye
person Terra
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ryou. Poor Tris and Seto wonder if their eyes burned? Ewww how gross, skinned alive. Well he asked for it. Seto's penis had a booboo. Gods the things kids come up with.
person Sapphire
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I almost missed this one, if it where not for the update notice you sent me I would have!
I did not need a box of tissues, but it was sad. If you actually killed Mokuba, seto would have your head, so it's a good thing you didn't.
I know tris is not really ok with the whole Joey Otogi thing, I don't want to know how that is going to go over.
And seto finaly accepts rodger! WOOHOOO! Even if it took mokuba getting shot for him to do so.
person Magget
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG YOU GUYS ARE GODDESSES!! *worships* *sobs* FINALLY OTOGI IS HAPPY!! *YAY!!* *sobs hysterically*
person Lady Elfskye
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So, Seto finally gets it, huh?? Poor Yami and Yugi!! Yum, Otogi and Joey action!! Ohh, GO KURA!!!!!!!!!!!


Lady Elfskye
person Bianca
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn IT. Yay, another chapter! Is Tristan ever gonna living in denile? Anyway, good chapter, I can't wait for the next one! Want a cookie? I made chocolate chip.
person zatken
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, man, I love all your work but this is one of my favorites ;-D Finally, Joey and Otogi got together (yipeee)....

And yeah, I want some blood, too....someone's gotta pay for what they did to Mokuba....
person Terra
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE TREMENDOUS!!!!! Damn that was great!!! Wonderful lime!!! Seto gets it finally about Roger!!! AND BAKURA GETS TO KILL SOMEONE!!!!!

We need more here.

BEAUTIFUL YOU SO ROCK!!!!!
person leaf zelindor
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-glomps-OMG!!!! i couldn't review before because my computer was screwed up! omg omg omg! i don;t know what to say...but i'm glad some things are working out..just wish circumstances didn't have to be so bad! -gives everyolushlushies- poor Mokie....awe.....i'll be watching for more! ~Leaf~