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RD:PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PLS PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CHANGE YUGI BACK I DONT WANT THE COWARDLY YUGI I WANT THE STRONG FAITHFULL YUGI BRING HIM BACK im warning u DD *hangs her DE up above her head*as long as yugi remains as how he is now this war hammer will forever come crashing down on yur head so unless u wish to start borrowing kaibas industrial sized botttles of asprin i highly suggest u finish this story and GET YUGI BACK TO HOW HE WAS BEFORE and YAMI BETTER SLAP SOME SENSE INTO THAT HEAD OF HIS well im waiting *drumming her claws on the ground*well gtg now but im continuing my wait and my hammerl bel be magically suspended above yur head DD and will continue to be so until u change yugi back to the way he was before well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^_______~ and remember what i told IM STILL WAITING

well Mokie is awake, thank goodness. How is Yami going to react to everything when he has his strength back? Poor Otogi, he sure is confused by Tristian's actions. I hope Tristian can help Seto. I liked the chapter, as always. looking forward to the next one.

Whooo Hoo!! Ask an ye shall recieve!! Wow!!!! Whatta lemon, but it was kinda sad too. Otogi is scared to vocalize love for Tris, Tris is afraid of Otogi's love and rejection, poor Joey is caught in the middle. And poor Seto. Damn, what the hell?? He just...snapped. And I bet you that Yami and Yugi walk in on everything. And Yugi is gonna snap. And it wasn't Seto that was the target in the first place. Damn. Update soon!! Please!!! *whimpers from withdraw already*

Lady Elfskye

Me: no way!!!
Tyson: what did you do that for?!
Me: *growls* TYSON! WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!
Tyson: what? I can't review wit you?
Me: Yami suppose to be here, not you!
Tyson: fine, i'll be with the other bladebreakers
Me: be there in a few minutes!!!
Tyson: *growls and leaves room*
Me: his so stubborn, just like in the show "beyblade"
Yami: *comes out off closet with a thud*
Me: *blinks* did Tyson did that?
Yami: Tyson locked me up
Me: *growls* i'll let him pay for this with my blade! *runs after Tyson*
Yami: um, UPDATE!!! *runs after me*

Poor Seto. Yugi needs to get it under control. Glad Mokie woke up. Is Tristian going to really give Otogi a chance? Hope you have fun in the states.

It just gets better with every chapter! I think...Tristan as the way he is in your story is really the kind of person he'd grow up to be, even if none of the events in your story ever came to pass. I suppose Otogi's attitude of submission irks me a little - I always thought it'd be he and *Tristan* who were the equals, but that's the personality that came through in the series, and everybody's free to interpret them differently. How you arranged him to fit ideally between Joey and Tristan is wonderful, so I can easily forgive Otogi for shutting up when he really should be having pissyfits. *grins* Though I'd LOVE to see Otogi have a good spirited pissyfit. We're going to get to see him have it out with Tristan over this, aren't we? Pwease?

And...oh lord...BAKURA! "I am the Queen of Sheba!" Yes, yes, he makes me squirm and that's quite all right with me. I'm *so* glad you didn't make him super!fluffy the way I've seen some people write him. But the humor you toss into the situation...it makes him easier to deal with. He's just one of those characters here that makes you want to laugh...and then makes you feel terribly guilty for wanting to laugh in the first place.

Just keep going! I'm certainly going to keep reading! And thanks for the updates - they keep me coming back. ^_~

YOU UPDATED!! Yugi's being a jerk!!!!! *pouts* come on your upseting me....CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!

Ah, it was an awesome chapter and a fun rollercoaster ride for the emotions. I have laughed, cried, got envious because of how much action they're having (pulls hubby closer to her), got angry, got bloodlusted, felt sorry....everything.

Justin's piece was a classic. I really laughed out loud on that one.

And Tristan, you ARE an asshole! Why do you have to be so mean to Otogi? And I don't know about yougi..gi....**shakes head**

**feels Lexi pull her pant leg**

Oh, where are my manners....sorry, honey.... **scratchead aad and blushes for cursing in front of Lexi**

Great chappie, guys ;-D Have a safe trip and don't keep us waiting too long for an update ;-D

awe....silly Tristan...it's funny how neither of them thinks the other loves them...-shakes head- anyway excellent update! ^_^ as always, i'm glad Mokie woke up! and i hope that Yugi and Seto can patch things up soon, don't like seeing Seto like this. nope nope ^-^ ~Leaf~

another good chappie... i guess Tris is gonna have to make this difficult, and Yugi, holy hell... Yami better come batter come back asap.