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person Kschur32
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your right I cried. The chapter as a whole was a heart tugger. Well done, I'm glad that yugi is back with Seto. Good for Trn ann and Yami.
person Shakster
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! Ahhhh, sniff, sniff... Yugi and Seto are back together. I can't help wondering what Tristan will think about Seto calling Yugi's name like that... I guess he understands, but still... that has to hurt. Poor Yami, can't wait for him to come baand and the kids were cute as always. Great chapter... like any chapter you write isn't great. Loved it. ^_^
person Lady Elfskye
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's about time Yugi went home!!

Man, Justin's just too smart for his age. Maybe Otogi should listen to him. Maybe he should talk to Tris too!! And Lexi and the die was priceless! I keep waiting for my neice to try that one. LOL!! Otogi needs a kid of his own!! He'd be great!

Make up lemon, straight ahead!! Yummy!!!

Update soon, OK?? I miss these stories!!

Lady Elfskye
person smalvina
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
yugi is back that is so great
now we only need for moki to return to us and for seto to tell him about his past
person smalvina
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter
yugi is back that is so great
now we only need for moki to return to us and for seto to tell him about his past
person smalvina
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great fic
can't wait for the next chapter
person Shakster
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, another lovely chapter of an addicting story... I'm ready to be done with Tristan.... but I know he's scared. And Seto... poor thing... at least Yami's awake, sort of.
person Leaf_zelindor
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yaya for updates! ^^ neede! -e! -lol0- no very good chap had me oe ede edge of my seat, i really should go to bed though, i'm tired and i have church in the morning. anyway! good job! awe....poor Seto...~leaf~
person DRTTY PERSON!!
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I WILL BE YOUR LOVESLAVE IF YOU UPDATE!! I WILL DO ANYTHING FOR YOU!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!

ANYTHING!!

IMAPLING SELF ON SETO'S COCK... SURE!!!

GREAT STORY, IM LOVING IT TO BITS!!!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!

I BEG YOU

PLEASE
WITH CHERRIES AND JOEY'S CUM ON TOP *WINK*
person Bluesake
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG......CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!! SETO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ;_;