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for Family By Choice

by Mellybean

person zatken
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dang....that was an INTENSE chapter! Man....and you've killed me with that near-lemon with Tristan and Otogi....why do you have to be so cruel to me **lol** So right now, Otogi and I share the same fate - we have to wait 'til next time....

Ah....

Anyway, good chappie my dears...keep it up and please update very very very soon ;-D
person Kschur32
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad the Yugi has come around. Poor Mokuba, I hope he starts feeling his legs soon. Tristan and Otogi need to have a long talk. And What away to end the story. Poor Joey, flashbacks are a bitch. In otherwards great chapter as always.
person Terra
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that came together GREAT!!!
I loved it.
Now, I WANT MORE!!!!!

Blame Seto, not me.
person smalvina
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was sad
can we have some good news?
i hope to read your next chapter soon.
more of bakura please (if you can)
person DracOnyx
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once again, another great chapter. So glad Yami will be back soon . . . he seems to be a stabalizer for everyone. I couldn't stop laughing at what Bakura did to poor Nathan . . . I've actually done that to a friend of mine, and I agree with my beautiful fiend . . . it is WAY too much fun to resist. Can't wait to see what you come up with next . . . great job!

DracOnyx and her muses
person Shakster
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sniff... aw, good to see Seto and Yugi together again. Can't wait for Yami to return. Poor Mokie, he's so frustrated, as I'm sure anyone would be. Tristan and Otogi... it just can't be good, can it. Un-break my heart is one of my favorite songs... lovely. And now Joey's having a flashback, wonderful... the angst just doesn't end.. but it's so well written how can I not like it.
person zatken
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Would it be too much to ask for a Honda / Otogi lemon wit without Joey for now)? I feel so bad for Honda and Otogi, and I would just be so thrilled and happy for them (and for me, of course) when they understand that they really love each other too.

Ah, what a dream....and please update soon ;-D

BTW, this is the fifth time that I read this chapter (and second time to review it)....and we're not talking about mere browsing....we're talking about carefully reading this chapter...still soo said...
person DracOnyx
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! *debates tearing her hair out and realizes she'd have none left cause she cut it* GAH!

Dang it! and just when Yugi finally pulled his head out of his ass! VILE! *runs into Marik's arms* just vile . . . I don't think I can wait until you update.

Marik : Please update soon . . . because I don't think she's going to let go until you do at this point.

Drac : Exactly. I need to cuddle after that.

Marik : *sigh* So please hurry. I promise Sephiroth and I are working her to get her writing done soon too.
person zatken
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still crying....that was such a good chapter. Very sad. I'm glad that Yugi finally realized what he did to Kaiba, but I can't help but feel bad for Tristan - especially since Kaiba broke the rules between them.

Ay....please please please update very very soon....and I like the scene you guys wrote with Otogi in it...too cute.

Hell, everything in this chapter was good ;-D
person leaf Zelindor
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-glomps- lol i just said to my dad today that i was sure this fic would be updated since i hadn't been on AFF in like a week. XD very good chap, sad but sweet and Yugi awe.....-just gets all starry eyed- alright i need to go to bed ^_^ good chap! ~Leaf~