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person zatken
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Who in the world has the right mind to do such a thing ::so angry::

And poor Lexi's r... ...

Update soon, please.
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey hon sorry for not reviewing you sooner hope you can forgive me
anyways i love the story so far you are and awsome writer ^_^
please keep up the great work I can't wait to see more chapter from you
YOU ROCK HON HUGS UPDATE SOON LUV YA!!!!!!!
person kschur32
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I havr to tell you that you got me hooked to your writing with you 'Stronger' story. In fact last week I looked up your stories by author and read the first story in this trilogy and I loved it. I read some of the others. You are very good and have great hooks at the end of your chapters. I look forward to reading the rest os this story. I do have a question though. Is there a reason why Lexie looks so much like Tristan? The mind wanders to all of the possabilities. keep up the good work.
person bakurasgirl
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Joey. That's gotta hurt. And I tell you...hate crimes suck!

Aria: Unkie Puppy desserfs wots of M's. That sood make him feel better.
Aten: Umm...I tink Unkie Puppy nees more den M's, Awia. ie Pie Puppy nees
a hug! *hugs Joey*
Robbie: Great chappie, dragon! *cheers*
person ykarzel
schedule December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*snuggles story* The title of this is my life in a nutshell. I love it more then anything. keep it up. heee.
person zatken
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Kaiba, you've got to chill about Mokuba. I don't know what will be a bigger shock for you - that he's dating OR that he's gay or bi (don't know where this is going yet).

Aww.... Lexi's sooo cute ;-D And Joey graduates ::claps:: Way to go, Joe!

And poor Otogi's a slut... ::sob:: Someone save him from the misery.

And more mischief from Ryou and Bakura, please. And as to Bakura's mischief, whether it be threatening someone, having fun with his light, sending someone to the Shadow Realm, being vindictive, or worse, more please ;-D

ps: still bothered about the Epilogue from Stronger (loved the entire story, BTW) because Tristan's Mom and Dad are up to no good... ::sigh::
person Neko Jounouchi AKA Jams
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Jams: YEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ::glomps Dragon and Yami Dragon::
Chibi Yugi Plushie: Yay!! New story!!
Neko Jounouchi: Oh goody!! And Moku-chan's bangin' a guy!!
Seto Plushie: X.x
Jams: Go Mokuba. ::giggle::
Evil Malik Doom Dollie: And that slut Devlin... ::laughs aloud:: XD
Dukie Plushie: That's not very nice Malik.
Neko Jounouchi: Duh! That's why he said it.
Jams: -.-U The things I put up with. Well my Dragon friends, can't wait to see what happens next. ::huggles Lexi:: ^^
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story hon OMG Keep up the great work ^_^ I wonder what will happen if Seto ever found out about Mokie O_O Never mind bad idea. Anyways I can't wait to see another chapter soon keep up the great story ^_^ YOU ROCK ^___-
person bakurasgirl
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Mokuba's getting some lovin!!!

Seto: I can't believe I just read that.
Ryou: *shurgs* kids ...they have to grow up sometime. *Eyes Aten and Robbie
playing in the corner*
Aten and Robbie: What??
Robbie: I don't want to lose my penis down the bathrub drain!
Aten: I'll keep an eye on it for you, Wobbie!
Aria: *hands bowl of M&M's to Seto* These will make you feel better, Unkie Seto!
Great chappie! Poor Unkie Togi. I hope that Unkie Tissan and Unkie Puppy don't
make Unkie Togi's bum fall off! That would be bad because Unkie Togi would miss his butt.

person akuchan
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is greatfar.far. I can't wait for Seto to find out his baby bro is having sex, I wanna see him bust a blood vessel. Please don't make us wait for 15 chapters for Joey, Tristan & Otogi to get together, but I know you'll make it worth the wait. Besides there's more to this story than sex I am sure. Anyway I just wanted to say good job and love it so far!
Akuchan