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by Mellybean

person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RD; its ok i DD and YD i think this chappie compensated for it hehe god that was fucking hilarious WOOT go jou KICK THAT FUCKING BASTARDS ass hehe and im not sure who the mysterious protecter/servants are i know there servents/loyal henchppl to tristan back in egypt but other then that NOO clue hehehe but seriously this is great keep up the great work you two and update soon pls THANK YOU ^__^ JA NE
person koalared
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! You updated. Thank you. Glad to hear you say you'd update your other stories too.
Can't wait for the next chapter. *G*
person leaf Zelindor
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! yay for updating! ^_^ awesomeeeee -giggles- well worth the wait. and i do hope to see more soon ^_^ as always. happy to see Jou coping some more, and Bakura....-snickers- he's priceless....XD
~Leaf~
person DracOnyx
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*glomphs author* Yippee! *looks horrified at herself and stands back up, glancing at Bakura as she does*
You didn't see that luv! *ignores the snickering Tomb Robber*

So glad to see you back DDYD! I've checked these religiously, hoping you would update soon, besides constantly rereading them to keep them fresh in my head.

Another beautiful chapter, and just what Joey needed, I think. Serves Dan right . . . but I wonder who the other guy was. *ponders curiously* Ah well, I'm sure you'll tell us soon enough.

As for the mysterious group . . . my guess is the Dark Scorpion Gang. Y'know, the cards? I'm pretty sure it was them . . . fits the description rather well. If I got it right, I want a 'Kura plushie : ) *hops up and down* hope I got it right.

Blood drunk 'Kura playing with Tub Toys . . . that - was - priceless! I can't get that image out of my head . . . thank you! After a lousy night, that was just what I needed to lighten my mood. I ever tell you how much I love you? Well, I am now!

Can't wait for more, but I know I'll have to, so I'll just sit back patiently and work on my own fics until you post again. Love you hun, and thank you!

DracOnyx and her psychotic Muses
person koalared
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a gripping story. You really should finish it. Please?
person Scylla
schedule December 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mruuuh....loyal reader here, checking back again in the vain hope of the pleasure of another update.

You DO realize that when you finally manage to bring Joey, Tristan, and Otogi together, you'll be my idol, right? I've been trying desperately for months, working at fiction for them. Except for you, I haven't seen *any* authors write these three together. Tristan's my die-hard favorite character, and I love reading about him with the two boys he seems to relate to most in the series. The way you write Tristan is compelling - this could possibly BE his grown-up self, and the self-assured, smartass, and dare I say badass man he's become is beyond attractive. Mwee. Pity the thought of a woman turns his stomach. ^_~ I'll just have to settle for watching. I can't wait for the next chapter - Joey's going to be kicking ass and taking names, and you already got my blood going because they're on a *motorcycle,* headed out of Kaiba's estate.

Question: Does Tristan have his own motorcycle? And if not, why *doesn't* he? He had one in the series...and it seems like an extension of himself.
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
RD:hehe good to hear from u two after soo long hehe and great chapter gods that hole male anatomy joke was hilarious and poor kaiba he quite literally infact walked right into that one oh boy and HA TAKE THAT U SOB that oughta teach you DO NOT MESS WITH BAKURA DUMB ASS unless u want to end up like Walters you had best stay the HELL AWAY FROM TRISTAN AND LEXI DO U HEAR ME YOU SCUM SUCKING PIG hehe not that im yellin at you two DD&YD im yelling at greg aka Tristans father ya you know the bastard/SOB husband of the BIATCH from hell huh well like i always say its only a matter of time before KARMA BITES YOUR SRY ASSES AND MAKES YOU PAY BOOOYA hehe oh and WOOT WOOT GO BAKURA GO BAKURA UDA BOMB hehe ya ya ya woot woot hehe hey bakura its your birthday were gonna party like its yur birthday hehe keep it up you two hehe i wanna see ryou and Bakura get married for one thing two i wanna see mokuba outa that hospital three i wanna see every single last member of the so called "Concerned Citizens for Family Values" to pay for all they've done huh well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW and DONT forget to update you two cya ^____~
person smalvina
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter
glad to read more of your chapters
person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule September 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*singing*"A new day has come"

Black Red Dragon:uh sis points to DD&YD

huh *looks*oh oops hehe sry bout that i just love that song A new Day Has Come from Celine Dion shes my fav deva oh and one thing you two *glomps them*THANK YOU you updated thank you so much i just hope that creep dosnt touch your stuff anymore maybe you should put some kind of fire wall up or something to block fags like him (no offence to gays and lesbians out there for i have nothing against ppl with that kind of preverence cuz in my eyes its bastards like the guys who screwed around with DD&YDs work ppl like him are the faggots in my eyes brainless stupid faggots with nothing better to do then cause trouble to honest ppl HUH)well anyways keep up the great work DD&YD ^__^ you really made my day cuz i had to go to the DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUN THE D M V *screams bloody murder*hehe sry i hate the DMV as much as i hate the three biggest bullies on the face of th earth known as Charley Frances and Ivan and if you dont know what im talking about its the hurricanes those bullies beat up my state *pouts*shes just a flower she dosnt deserve such brutal treatment huh well again keep up the great work you two itd cheer me up BIG TIME well TTFN TA TA FOR NOW ^_____^
person DracOnyx
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! Another chapter, and Yami's back! Yippee! *goes around dancing*

Marik - Don't mind her . . . her life is finally straightening itself out and we decided to come back and help her write again, so she's in a really odd mood.

Sephiroth - you mean good mood, don't you?

Marik - No, I mean odd mood. Even her 'good' moods don't get her dancing here lately. *shrug* anyway . . . *grunts as he gets shoved out of the chair*

Drac - Anyway, good chapter and can't wait to see more. Hope everything is well with you : ) *goes back to dancing as Marik picks himself up off the floor*

Marik - See? Odd mood . . . *shakes head and wanders off to try to calm Drac down* The things I put up with . . . .

DracOnyx and Her Muses