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person bakurasgirl
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*mocks* I KNOW SOMETHING YOU DON'T KNOW! I KNOW SOMETHING YOU DON'T KNOW!
Yes, humble reviewers and readers, my wife loves to torture you guys. Then again,
so do I with my cliffies. Ask Lady Elfskye. She can tell you all about it!
MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

Aten: Daddy? What's jackoff mean?
Marik:...........*Look of horror appears on face*
Aten: Daddy?
Marik: *shakes his head* We already went through the 'What's that
and how come Aria doesn't have one speech! We are NOT doing that question yet! Come to me
in about twenty years and ask me that, son.
Aria: SQUEE! great chappie Ms. Bakurasgirl's wife-lady! Love you! Bye-bye!
person Mary
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil! Evil, I say! How can you leave it there? *cries* Please update quickly or I just might go insane.

(Great fic, btw. ^_~)
person IYYashi
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: What's in the box?
Yumi: We have so many questions!
Yuji: God your great at writing please hurry up with your update!!
Yumi: Pl UPD UPDATE!!!
person KC
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My Yami's asleep cause its still early to wake up. *snicker* *shouts* WHAT WAS THAT FOR?! I WANTED TO SEE WHAT'S IN THE BOX!!! OH, SO YOUR NOT GOING TO LET TRISTAN TELL SETO ABOUT MOKUBA WHAT HAPPENED THE OTHER NITE? *pouts* YOUR SO MEAN!!! *laughs* YOU GOTTA CONTINUE THIS FIC!!! I LUV IT SO FAR!!! PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG UPDATE!!!
person Sour
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Get right to work on the next chapter! :)
person Oneida
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter... sucky events in said chapter.. but still... yay!
person IYYashi
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: Get onto the next chap right away!!
Yumi: Oh god this is so cool!!
Yuji: That was mean! It said "Die Faggots" that's mean!!
Yumi: It's only a fan fic and I'm real sure that whoever wrote that Bakura will personally kill
Yuji: Yami he personally kills everyone who did something bad
Yumi: True but he is hot headed.
Yuji: Well update real soon
Yumi: UPDATE!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yea Gods!!! WTF are ya doing?? Damn!! Poor Lexi!! Of course they would start there, not with Seto's place. They are soooo dead once the gang finds out who is doing thist. St. So dead!! Arrggghhh!!!! Not cool. Update soon!! Real Soon!!

Lady Elfskye
person Kschur32
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH My God! I'm all shaky and upset. The house, their things, and animal blood. Its like an arm of the clan has visited them. I have friends that are same sex married couples (as close as you can be in Texas at least) and I would be out to kill if something like this happened to them.
Poor Mokabu (sp) he is growing up. Sucks to be young an have uncontrolable hormons.
Good chapter. I look fod tod to more.
person gralnak
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eep!
...........
I hope Bakura gets whoever did that.
:)GRALNAK