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by Mellybean

person Bunny
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hands plushie bunny to Lexi* whew! i swear... i never know what to expect with each chapter... and don't ya know i loves it that way!! :) i feel so bad for Otogi, though... *glomps Otogi* poor baby... and big AAAAAAAAAWWW to the whole Seto & baby factor... can't wait to see how that goes... and hmmmm... perhaps some foreshadowing with the whole Tristan's medication not working/try not to get hurt in the next 14 days? hmm? hmmm? hmmmmmm? *evil grin* Gods, how i love Tristan angst... sick, yes... but i can't HELP it!!! he's just so.... soo.... GAAAAAAH!!! *glomps Tris*... do i have to let go? Can't i keep him? *sniffle* please? *sigh* and with the way the poor boy is smoking, i'm half expecting some lung cancer in a future chapter... boy needs to cut DO! :)! :) Anywho... love your stuff, as usual, and keep up the good work... it's so hard to find a good Tristan angst fix these days! you rock!!! luv, Bunny ;)
person Joey Fanatic
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ANOTHER KID???
Jeeze, you must have a thing for small orphaned children.
Or is it just me?
Anyway, this is a great story! I want to see Joey teach his patient how to play Duel Monsters . . . It would be really funny if he lost . . .
I can;t wait for the next chappie!
person magget
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO SAD!!! very nice ending to the chapter though...the following toys go to!:::
lexi: Dark Magician statue to go with her Celtic Guardian *they make a cute couple*
justin: PS2 and Manhunt...FRICKIN GOOD GAME MAN
bakura: dagger with entwined dragon handle....let him kill!
everyone else: 50 dollar gift certificate to...spencers...hehehe


UP DATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Sour
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! A baby! You made my heart stop at the end of chapter three with that and I was thinking, "Uh-oh..." but it was 'only' a baby! :)

So, as for Lexi, I think she should have these nice Barbie matches. They are very nice toys which I enjoyed very much during my own youth.
person Bluesake
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love the fic! continue!! ohhhh baby!!! ^_^x
person Terra
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job!!! I read EVERYTHING you have posted in one night. Great plots and drama. Update soon and keep the great stories coming.
person Arial
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please please please please continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Arial
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh and what's going to happen with Otogi and the fact that he's in love with both Tristan and Joey.
person Amanda
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*spins happily* I always love seeing new chapters to your guys' fics. Poor Otogi! *huggles him* Though I must confess I love to see characters suffer, so I hope you have more angst in store for him. ^^;;; And Joey, too, of course, since he's my absolute favourite. Please update again soon!

*gives Lexi a wolf plushie*
person nak+nak
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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BABY!!!:):):)
:)GRALNAK