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person Kschur32
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK now with Mokabu's thoughts added in I really hate that girl. What a bitch! anyway just add this to my other review.
person KC
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: oh geez! Let Mokuba tell his brother about his problems already!!!
Yami: slow down koi
Me: why should i slow down? Its been almost two weeks since those 2 updated!!!
Yami: hey yea, update tomorrow right AWAY!!!
Me: i can't wait what happens to Mokuba Yami: u know, Serenity should be in this chapter...
Me: *looks at Yami* why would she?
Yami: to help out Mokuba, cause aren't they the same age about?
Me: not the same age in the anime koi, Serenity is 13 while Mokuba is 10 in the anime
Yami: yea, well, whatever age Mokuba is in this story, Serenity should be 3 years older
Me: good point, but its not my Story koi, its "dragon's"
Yami: *frowns* ah, her choice! LET'S SEE MORE MOKUBA ACTION IN THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!! *leaves room*
Me: CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE!!! *runs after Yami*
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Lemons!!! Whoooohhooo!!! Man, oh, man!! Poor Mokuba!! I can kinda sympethise with him. In the way it happened. So sudden, like nothing mattered anymore, your body had a mind of its own. Oh, yeah. Damn, Matthew is sooo cute!!! Whatta name!!! Lovely chappie!! Can't wait for more!!

Lady Elfskye
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwww poor Mokuba
Keep yup the great work
and um do you think
you could fit yugi and yami in there
I miss there alone time ^_^
Keep up the aswome jobe HUGS
person Arial
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome please contintue
person bakurasgirl
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmm.....lemon. Gods...must squish Matthew!!!!!! Aww....I know how Seto and tris feel...
Poor hot, mind-linked bishies!!! Great job, baby girl!

Aten: Mashew a toot baby!
Aria: SQUEE!!! A BABY!
person IYYashi
schedule January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yumi: What the fuck did Moki do?!
Yuji: I think her name was Becky.
Yumi: Hikari I didn't mean it like that.
Yuji: Oh O_O
Yumi: Dammit and I was starting to like this Roger guy
Yuji: Yeah I guess but he is way to foward.
Yumi: That's what I like about him!
Yuji: I'm still confused about how Tris and Seto feel for each other and how they feel for Yugi, Yami, and Joey.
Yumi: I don\are are that lemon was hot!!
Yuji: I closed my eyes.
Yumi: Trust me then.
Yuji: Well we can't wait for you next update!!
Yumi: UPDATE!!!
person KC
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: OK! ITS BEEN LIKE 9 DAYS! DON'T U GUYS UPDATE LIKE EVERY WEEK?!
Yami: calm down koi...
Me: how could i calm down if they didn't updated yet since about a week ago?!
Ya*sig*sighed* they will koi for once, they will
Me: oh, r u guys going 2 make a story about Yugi/Yami/Seto's wedding??? YOU SHOULD!!!
Yami: what's so great about them? Tristan and Joey is an unusual pairing
Me: still, I WANNA THE THE WEDDING PART!!!
Yami: uh oh... *leaves room*
Me: LET'S SEE THE WEDDING!!! ALSO, WHY DON'T U LET TRISTAN TELL SETO ABOUT MOKUBA? AFTER ALL, HE SHOULDN'T BE MEAN TO HIS LITTLE BROTHER, RIGHT?! ANYWAYZ, CONTINUE 2 UPDATE NOW CAUSE ITS AT BET BEEN 2 WEEKS!!! CONTINUE!!! *runs after Yami*
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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It's not much but ever since reading this series the thoughts been running around in my head to do something for you as a thank you for sharing your wonderful writing with all of us so...hope you like. If you do let me know I have a few more inspired by you.
En dépit du proverbe, la curiosité ne détruit pas toujours le chat,
Ravana
person zatken
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw....I absolutely love this chapter. A baby - mega cool ;-D I thought that it was a bomb or something bad. I just love everyone's interaction with one another and it clearly shows in this chap-- o-- one of the reasons I love your stories.

Hmmm....let's see....okay, Lexi, here's what Auntie Zatken has for you:

(1) A Joey Starter deck, 1st Edition (well, it's the girl's father ;-D
(2) A nice antique four-story Victorian dollhouse, complete with furniture, dolls, and all the frills
(3) A big Talking Tickle Me Elmo stuffed toy
(4) An Easy-Bake oven
(5) A Yugi Starter deck, 1st Edition (well, it's her uncle ;-D
(6) A Kaiba Starter deck, 1st Edition (same reason as #5)
(7) One of each - Yugi, Kaiba, and Joey Collector'n
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(8) I forgot namename of the doll, but it's this 3-foot doll (she looks real) and her hair can go short or long (the doll has a button somewhere). I thought that it would be such a cool gift because of Lexi's fascination with people's hair ;-D
(9) 10 outfits for the 3-foot doll
(10) A baby doll (this doll looks, weights, and feels like a real baby -- I have one of these and it is so cool and surreal). I'm thinking that she might get jealous of Justin having a baby brother and all ;-D

Okey dokey, Lexi, hope you like some of the new toys I got for you ;-D Luv lots....

ps: back to the fic...poor Otogi.... ::sob::