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by Mellybean

person zatken
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ay, caramba. Good chappie ::claps and stands up:: Please please please please update very soon.

Thank God that woman got fired, and Tristan now gets it that Joey's not angry about his relationship with Seto.

::chuckles over the mental image of Bakura in pink, and over the cuteness of it all::
person Arial
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good.
Please Update.
What's going to happen with Joey and Otogi?
person DracOnyx
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay . . . I just started reading this, finished what you have so far in one sitting, and all I can say is . . .WOW!

I really like where this is going and what you're doing with it. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoohoo!! Joey lubs Otogi!! Yeah!! Tris and Seto, yeah! Yami, Yugi, Seto Yeah!! Tris and Joey, Yeah!! One big orgy...............Oh, how I wish! Wonderful, simply wonderful!! Huh, poor Otogi!! Some bitch is in trouble!!

Lady Elfskye
person bakurasgirl
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Chappie! Poor Otogi...ouchies. I know how a belt buckle hurts...and stings.
*hugs Otogi plushie*
Tristan=bitchy muse


Aten: OH NO! UNKIE TOGI'S BUM WILL FALL OFF! *holds Otogi's bum*
Aria: OH NO! TOGI'S BUM! *holds Otogi's bum*

person KC
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
w hat was that for?! NO MOKUBA IN THE END?!!!!!!!!!! augh! Please continue 2 update asap!!!!!!! i can't wait 2 see what happens next!!! continue and don't wait 2 long 2 update!!!!!
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor Joey and Duke
I hope things work out
keep up the great work ok
update soon ^_^
person Ykarzel
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snuggles Otogi* let's have joey call tristan, say, "look babe, i've got a seto in my life to, and he needs me" and then Jeoy can be everything that Otogi needs. yes. yes. yes.... and kill the bitch on the phone
person Amanda
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always. ^_^ Joey and Yugi are so devious. I hope you don't keep us waiting too long for the next installment! I'm looking forward to seeing more of Otogi, and of his unhealthy relationship. I'm an angst addict, what can I say? XP Wonderful fic!
person Neko Jounouchi AKA Jams
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Must.... review..... ::thunk:: -.-ZZZzzzZZZZzz
Seto Plushie: And she can't eve finish.
Neko Jounouchi: Hey she worked hard tonight!!
Seto Plushie: You mean hardly worked...
Neko Jounouchi: Hey ass kissing IS hard work!!
Chibi Yugi Plushie: Jams says it's 90% of the job... Jams looks like Mathew right now!! XD
Seto Plushie: I'm not cleaning it up. She drools like you do mutt.
Neko Jounouchi: ><