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person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE BRING ON THE LEMON PLEASE
awww poor Justin that is so sad i hope it will all work out
PLEASE UPDATE SOON ^_^
KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK ^__^
person KC
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: *pouts* no Mokuba in this chappie?
Yami: didn't u just add another review today?
Me: yea, telling "dragon" that we want Mokuba!!!
Yami: i know, we thought Seto was going to flip over his brother
Me: eventually not in this chapter though
Yami: *leaves room*
Me: forget about her, the next chappie better be about MOkuba telling Seto about Roger and Becky!!! If not, i'm going 2 be pretty upset and my koi wouldn't like it one bit. Anywayz, please continue 2 update!!! *sighs* its really hard typing in a laptop than a uteruter cause i'm using a laptop right now... well, continue and it it at the end of this week!!! LATER!!! *runs after Yami*
person Angel-Belle
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there, just spent my night catching up with your story..LOL! It's really good!
person magget
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!!!
person Terra
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A total riot!!!! Every time I've assembled a crib it was the exact same way. Hurray!!! Mokuba's in love!! Now just for poor Otogi and life is good.
Terrific job you are doing. I'll be waiting impatiently for the next chapter. Get well wishes to your hubby.
person Kschur32
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man Jneedneeds to tell Tristian about the night at Otigi's (SP). Poor Guy in love with both Joey and Tristian (but then who wouldn't be). The putting the crib together was classic. I was laughing so hard that my cats were looking at me like I was going crazy. So Mokabu and Roger sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G, Fisrt comes love the come Seto's boot up Roger's..... Don't know think Seto might get a little pissed off there. I mean he is only slightly over protective (And I got a ge ige in boorklyn) of his little brother.
Any who...good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Go Mokuba!! Heh, Seto is gonna have a cow!! Poor Otogi! Man oh man! Really cool chappie!! I hope Hubby gets better soon! Truly!! I was gonna ask about "Dead End Street", but it ain't no biggie. You guys all have your hands full right now. Take care!

Lady Elfskye
person Sour
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wowzers, that chapter was so impressive/awesome/it oscillated my socks right off my feet! I really appreciate the email notifications.

And I hope your husband is well!
person KC
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: HOLY SHIT!!!!!!!!!!!
Yami: *laughs* Dragon surprised u?
Me: HELL YEA! PUT THE NEXT CHAPTER UP BY THIS WEEKEND!!!!!!!!!
Yami: u really want Seto to find out about Mokuba's relationship?
Me: HELL YEA!!!!!!! HIS GONNA FLIP!!!!!
Yami: *looks confused* flip?
Me: *sighs* u know, his going to be mad or furious at Mokuba
Yami: oh... *leaves room*
Me: *begs Dragon and co-author* PLEASE!!!!! PUT IT BY THIS WEEKEND!!!!! I REALLY, REALLY WANT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS WHEN SETO FINDS OUT ABOUT MOKUBA'S RELATIONSHIP WITH ROGER!!!!! ESPECIALLY BECKY, WAS SHE THE GIRL IN "STRONGER THAN BEFORE?" WHEN YUGI AND YAMI OPENED THE GAME SHOP? AH, JUST CONTINUE!!!! CAN'T WAIT TO SEE THE REACTION!!!! CONTINUE!!!!!!! *runs after Yami*
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww Joey and Duke how sweet YEAH
that is so cute and Moukuba has found real love
WOW GREAT WORK AWWWW ^_^datedate soon please please please
This story rocks UPDATE SOON ^_-