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by Mellybean

person Kschur32
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God! I laughed so hard. Bakura and red lipstick. That was great! I don't like that man watching the kids play, scary. Please no Bobby This is such a great story. I'm waiting for the next chapter on the edge of my computer chair.
person Bambi
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the first time I've reviewed. >_< *covers face* But DAMN, you are like...the best of the best! ^^ A Bakura/Ryou lemon next? *squeals* Good luck, update soon!

~Bambi
person Lady Elfskye
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tears from eyes as I die laughing* Poor 'Kura!! LOL!!! More soon!!!!!

Lady Elfskye
(sorry for short review, but mama is being nosy)
person zatken
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dang, Kaiba - please take a chill pill and don't have a fit about Mo and Roger.

Okay, guys, you've done a great chapter - as well as lemons (just like always).
person keisha
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
by far the best fic ive read so far!! i love it to bits!! please please (im begging!) update soon!!
person magget
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GET THE LEMON UP!!!..and im praying for your husband, and justin *actaullys prays*
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!! *sends pics of bakura in pink lipstick to all of maggets friends*
person bakurasgirl
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*bakurasgirl hugs Bakura* It's ok, Bakura...I understand
Bakura:.....I get no respect.
Aria: My Daddy love lipstick? *hands Bakura lipstick*
Bakura: EVEN MY OWN DAUGHTER! *storms out of house angrily*
Aria: DADDY WANT MY PINK BOWS???
Bakura:.......*sigh*
person DracOnyx
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*collapses laughing hysterically for several minutes* OH . . . RA! *pulls herself back up into her chair, wiping tears from her face* That was just too perfect . . . poor Bakura. Pink lipstick really isn't his color . . . I would think a deep red would be most complimenting! *giggles insanely* That was just great . . . thank you so much for that scene!
Great chapter . . . can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. Please do continue : )
person Terra
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would loved to have gotten a copy of that video too. Pink lipstick!!
I can't wait for the next chapter and bring on some more Mokuba romance.
Great Job yet again!!
person KC
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: WHEN'S THE NEXT CHAPPIE?!
Yami: uh oh, red alerun fun for your lives!!! *runs around screaming*
Me: *sweatdropped* um, koi, did u have too much sugar with you?
Yami: *giggles* maybe, after all, we ate in a restaurante for your b-day koi
Me: *blushes* but my b-day isn't until thursday on Washington's b-day koi
Yami: fuck with washington, he stole your b-day
Me: no he didn't love...
Yami: *laughs* i want you tonight baby, for your early b-day present
Me: *blushes* tonight? well, um...
Yami: don't you want me?
Me: yea, i do...
Yami: meet me in a few... *leaves room*
Me: forget about her, super hyperactive today. oh, so, your not going to do a story about Yugi/yami/Kaiba's wedding?! Well, is the next chappie going 2 be about Mokuba telling Seto about Roger and Becky?! I HOPE SO!!! PLEASE SAY THAT U WILL PUE NEE NEXT CHAPPIE BY THE END OF THE WEEK!!! CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE, LATER!!! *runs after Yami*