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by Mellybean

person LadyGrey
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFR!!! You're Not DEAD!!!

I've been waiting SOOO long for this update, oh my Ra, I never gave up hope, NEVER!! DD, I'm SO glad to see you're back, we all know how RL can be but hey, update when you can and you can bet that all of your fans are going to be right here waiting for you no matter what. Wonderful update too, gods please... I can't even imagine what you're going to do to them now. Much, much love and thank you so much, and Welcome Back!!! Kitten For You!! =^..^= Ja! ~LG
person Leaf Zelindor
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O....it started out so cute and happy....AHHHH!!!! how can do this to me!!!! -clings- excellent chapter, my roommate even knows everything that's been happening to this point and she thinks i'm crasy because i'm flipping out and oMG i have to go to work now! evil! -clings- more! need more! god where did they get the charges against Tristan? omg! -needs more- and i just started to reread all of this stuff this week too.. -lol-
~Leaf~
person koalared
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yesss!! You updated! Great chapter. Now I know what you meant when you said you couldn't believe what you were ptting Tristan thru.
At least the Dan threat is gone but still too many threats out there for our boys. You really can't leave us hanging for too long on this ending!
Will Tristan be ok? Will Lexi make it to Seto's ok? Will Seto hear Tristan? Is Joey going to be blamed for leaving the gates open (and letting Mokuba's
guard leave his post)? What is Bobby up to?
person Ali
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I absolutely love this story!

Your trilogy is one of my favourite Yu-gi-oh stories, because it's so interesting and so well written. My favourite pairing is Seto/Yami/Yugi, because they're so cute together. I love that you're not afraid to have them married, and adopting kids etc... It gives your stories a really nice feel, that and all the great smut.

Are you ever going to finish this? I noticed it's been ages since you updated. I'm sure there's a massive fanbase waiting for your updates!

Keep up the amazing writing, and I hope you update soon :P

From Ali
person annikki
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Have u no shame?????????????????????????How can u leave this story unfinished????????????????? You must finish it!!!!!!!!!!

Please?
person Audra
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Ahmet ibn Karim the same Karim that held the Scales ? And if so dose that mean your going to give him the scales and in turn Karim as a yami ? And if you do that , because Seto’s past incarnation was Karim’s twin , will you have Seto get Seth as a yami ? Wouldn’t that be funny trying to explain to Justin an Lexi why there are two men that look like their fathers but aren’t their fathers . I could see Justin asking questions till he’s blue in the face . Yami , Yugi , and Seto would have their hands full . And when the weird shadow guys said ‘ her ‘ they meant Otogi ( Because the soul has no gender ) right ??? Anyways , as always your style is great . Great chapter . Update soon I want to see if Tris stops being a dick to Otogi .
person sour
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's been soooooo loooooong since I've been here...wow, all I can say. I reread this in one sitting because I missed it. Amazing. I really hope an update comes soon *nudge*

As for that group, Dark Scorpion. *shifty eyes* Yes, I DID construct a warrior deck of my own...yes, I included them. It was/is a wicked deck, warriors and all, if I do say so myself...I'll go with that answer though.

*...more nudges for good measure*
person Ravana
schedule January 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I must agree with DracOnyx. My favorite cards...The Dark Scorpion group. *purrs* I love this series it's so addicting.
person smalvina
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
u updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Who r those men?
who were they looking for?
Honda?
Jou?
Who is the girl?
person zatken
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG *lmao* Ah, Bakura really made my day...very very cute...and hot.

But to sleep on someone *hmm...I would've still tied him down*

And Joey and Tristan's scene *sigh*...

Very very good chapter. Please update very soon....and I miss Lexi and Justin *sob*