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by Mellybean

person Kschur32
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!!!!!! What's the deal???? What a cliffhanger! This was a great chapter. Mo and Roger sitting in a tree..... So why is Seto so upset? Please don't do any of the soapy things like...'he's really your brother/cousin/nephew and so forth. And if he is upset why isn't Roger's mother.
The kitty/titty part was halerious. I was laughing so hard.
Justin talked to Bakura, how cute. Maybe Justin will see that Uncle Tomb Robber can be a cool guy.
LIke I said good as always. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Arial
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God that was sooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooooooood
but you left us in suspense
please update soon
thanx
person bakurasgirl
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm....lemon...Poor Mokuba. Well, I been in Mokuba's situation, and it's not pretty, that's for sure.
Seto will eventually have to accept it.

Aria: Daddy, will I ever have bests, too?
ra:.ra:.....
Ryou: *sweatdrop*
Marik: Moneybags is going to be a dick about all this, I know.
Malik: mmmm.....d---
Bakura: Don't even go there, Rod-Boy!
Aten: *blushes* I tink Mommy Mawik was dawna tay a bad word.

person bluesake
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh thats positivly evil! You cant end it like that!! nooooooooooo continue!!
person sour
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you left it there! Very hot, very funny. Sadie and her breasts had me laughing my socks off.
person princessoflightanddarkness
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY SNIFFFF SFF SNIFF
I hope you update soon I WANNA KNW WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN
PLEASE AWW POOR MOKUBA that was so mean of Seto but as he said he has reasons
but I want to know what it is so please UPDATE SOON PLEASE ^_^
EXECLLENT WORK BY THE WAY ^__~
person Terra
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man it hit the fan!!!!! Great cliff hanger!!! I can't wait til the next chapter.
person magget
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YOU!!! HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!??!?! NOW IM GOING TO BE COMING BACK EVERY OTHER HOUR TO SEE IF YOU UPDATED!!!! gah!!!
meanies....UPDATE SOON! what is seto gonna do? what happened to seto in the first place? WHY IS THE ALMIGHTY KAIBA AFRAID?!?!?!??!?....so umm...hurry up and update...
person sour
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AMAZING! As usual. I cannot wait for the next chapter by the sound of it!
person Kschur32
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was wondering if that storm ahd hit your area. I'm glad that all of you are safe and sound. A great chapter as always. Lexie screaming in the CAT scan tore me up. and the Tity cat...love it. Only Bakura would do that. Looking forward to the next chapter.