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person Sapphire
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oi!
I better have permission to throw fruit!
*throws underripe watermellon*
hah! take that! that was for lexi!
*throws rotten cantalope*
that was for otogi!
*throws tomatoes*
and that was fokubakuba angst!!!!!

anyways, I just thought I'd say my love is measured in frut, be happy you have a lot of it!!!!
good chapter, and you are evil!
what does your shop sell?
person magget
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn...you guys really like picking on otogi *not that I mind* do we get a flashback of what happened with seto, yami, and yugi and the maple syrup incident? ^^ *evil grin*. and of course, update soon! *cackles*
person Bluesake
schedule March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o.O I knew you were going to do something like this.......CONTINUE YOU MUST! ^_^x
person IYYashi
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yuji: O_O!! DUKE!! ;_;
Yumi: Yum lemon! Tris is so desperate and is being a fucking prick! Why can't he admit that he likes Otogi? Hmm?!
Yuji: Matthew was at least cute in this chap!
Yumi: But Yami had to stucstuck in bed
Yuji: Thanks to Tris and Joey...Tsk. Tsk.
Yumi: It kinda funny
Yuji: No it isn't
Yumi: I can't wait for the next chap, hun!
Yuji: UPDATE!!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I got dibs that Joey gets to Dan first!!! Then Tris and Seto close behind. Sorry, Bakura. Not this time. Oooo, that man is sooo gonna pay! I don't think there will be much left of him when they're done with him!!

Wonderful chappie as usual!!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Terra
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeah lemon, very good. My compliments. And finally, Dan will get his. Be sure to get a squeegie.
person Kschur32
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. kill Dan Kill him now. Good work as always.
person Neko Jounouchi AKA Jams
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Oh my god!!! Fuck Dan in the ass with a big rubber dick!! ><
Seto Plushie: My my Jams...
Evil Malik Doom Dollie: This is why I love her!! ^^ ::glomps Jams::
Chibi Yugi Plushie: That meany head!! Eat a dick Dan!!! ><
Seto Plushie: O.O Wow.....
Bakura Action Doll: Go Yugi!
Neko Jounouchi: Such colorful language there Yug'.
person bakurasgirl
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dan is in so much trouble! *releses angry, snarling, naked, horny Bakura*
That should do it. OH! I arm him with the Millenium Marasume, bringing up
his strength! Go Me!!!!!!!!!!
*Bakura kicks dan's ass!*
TIPPIE!
*hugs naked snarling, horny Bakura*
Marik: NO ONE CAN RESIST THE POWER OF MY MILLENNIUM ROD!
Bakura:......
Aten: *taps silver Milenium Rod in hand and grins evilly* Naked, snarling Bakura is NOTHING
compared to what me and my father would do! *hair twitch*
*Marik and teenage-Aten grin evilly*
person zatken
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm worried about the other guy who's with Dan. Have a mighty bad feeling....

Anyway, I hope that Tris doesn't become a total ass by distancing himself about Otogi and Joey and him together. Also had a good laugh about Yami getting "abused" by Seto and Yugi (he, he, he)...

Okey dokey. Awesome chapter, like usual. Please update very very soon ;-D