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by Mellybean

person DracOnyx
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! THAT WENCH HAS LEXI! Okay . . . BAkura was a thief . . . twenty six floors should be nothing after running from the Pharaoh's guards . . . right? Come on, 'Kura, you can do it . . .
person zatken
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, shit....what a roller coaster....

Shame on Tristan's parents to team up with Becket, the moron. Ay...

Anyway, good chappie like always, guys ;-D Please please please update very soon ;-D

ps: so, what do you guys have planned with Otogi, Joey, and Tristan?
person Neko Jounouchi AKA Jams
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Jams: Oh no!! She took Lexi!! Who does that bitch think she is?!?!
Seto Plushie: Oh great...
Evil Malik Doom Dollie: Kid's goin' around giving everyone the finger ::snickers::
Bakura Action Doll: I'm so proud ::whipes away a tear::
Neko Jounouchi: Oh sure they're not concerned that she's gone missing...
Chibi Yugi Plushie: Figures....
person Angel-Belle
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man...I hope Bakura can catch up with that lowlife before she gets away with Lexi...You are just sooo mean to them!! But I'm just as bad, cos I love all the drama...LOL!
person Shakirah
schedule March 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let me tell you what happened with this... Months ago I started reading Stronger Than Before...and then I rediscovered it... and spent an entire afternoon rereading it and catching up on Family by Choice... So needless to say. My eyes were bleeding... tearing... weeping... and I had an emotional experience... but a good emotional experience... and I enjoyed myself... very much... so this latest chapter is just another lovely addition to a lovely arc... and this review is just to tell you that I continue to be impressed by the magnificent writing that you bring to this fandom..
person Bluesake
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
..............No........you......cant.....do......that........*throws tomatoes* Just kidding! continue and god help us all
person Kschur32
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First of all, we have three fairly intellegent men who let the woamn leave the office, well kicked her out. Why did they not get someone to escourt her out, after they got more information from her. Men just don't think sometimes. Secondly, I bet Bakura is not happy about teaching Lexie how to sneek out of the daycare now. Lexie's mother better not hurt her and give her to someone else. Tristain may be the least of her prblems if Joey gets ahold of her. So anyway, this was a great chapter, of course. Looking foreward to the next one. Grat cliffhanger.
person Terra
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Let's hope Bakura can run fast.I can just see this able ble child giving people the finger and smiling so sweetly about it. LOL Great chapter
person Lady Elfskye
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YOU *DID NOT* JUST DO WHAT I THINK YOU JUST DID!!!!!!!! @_@

eep. did it.


I think I'm gonna be sick........

You *better* update soon!!!!!!!!

RUN BAKURA!!!!

Lady Elfskye





person keisha
schedule March 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY CRAP PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! THIS IS THE BEST I MEAN BEST FIC I HAVE EVER EVER READ.... I CHECK EVERYDAY FOR YOUR UPDATES ... PLEASE!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!