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*dies* I'm always so happy to see a new chapter to this fic. I understand you guys are busy (and it's great that your shop is doing well!) but the wait is *murder*! ^_~ Anyway, awesome chapter! I'm so glad Bakura and Ryou were able to save Lexi before she was whisked away. I may be a terrible angst addict, but I really didn't want to see Tristan and Joey go through that. Though also since I'm such a terrible angst addict, I can't wait to see what more you have in story for Otogi! *is a hypocrite* Is Dan going to strike again since he ran away? Will Tristan have to save him? Argh, n'tn't wait to see! Please update as soon as you can!

Good chappie...feel so sorry for Bakura, but I'm glad that he and Lexi are on good terms again.

Ah, Otogi....Tristan, you ass, knock some sense into that head of yours. Otogi's gonna run away again and you need to get your act together again.

And I love it when Seto and Tris fire people ;-D

Wow!! Cool chappie!! Mako does look cute in a uniform. I've learned that asking a child to lie, even for good reason, will come back to haunt you. Ba-ra kitty tum cute!!! LOLOLOL Really, though. This was an awesome chappie and it looks like things are starting to come out of the woodwork now!!

Lady Elfskye

Wow, that chapter just had about every emotion possible XD Great work as usual, I know I've never reviewed before, but that was only cuz my computer is a jerk and doesn't let me 90% of the time I want to. Excellent fic, all of your work is great though. ^____^ *hee* I'm gonna have to draw Bakura all 'dressed up'!! And surrounded by little girls *laughs* Poor Kura-kins.
Once again, excelletorytory, can't wait until next chapter!!
~YamiRynEnjeru

GO BAKURA! *cheers loudly* Now that's my fiend! Kick the living crap out of her! *does a victory dance* I'm so glad Ryou showed up in time to help Bakura stop that woman. And somebody needs to tie Otogi up . . . GENTLY . . . to a chair until he sees reason. Tristan needs to straighten his ass out too . . . geesh, males. And people say us females got issues?!
Anyway, great chapter, and I can't wait to read more, and soon.

Thank Goodness that Ryou was there to grab Lexie. You go Bakura, I wanted to do the same thing. I got teary eyed when Lexi was scared of Bakura. Maiko a police office and family man, how cool. OK what is with Orotgi (sp)? Why is he leaving? When will Tristan realise that he loves the dice man also? As always this was a great chapter. Waiting for the next one.

o_O........Why do you keep doing this? *pulls otogi back in the house*Y! -Y! -_- stress...CONTINUE I LOVE YOU GUYS!!!! ^_^x

Please, STOP tormenting Otogi!!! Either that or knock some sense into him. I want pictures of 'titty' Bakura too.

......................O.o ack!RUN BAKURA!!!!!!!! *mumble grumble* shes so gunna pay....*walks off into corner muttering*

Me: *growls* that woman!
Yami: *laughs* they are going 2 get caught by Bakura
Me: how can dat bitch take dat girl?!
Yami: dat's why she shouldn't be outta dayca Me Me: *laughs* dat's a nice point koi...*kisses Yami*
Yami: *moans* not here koi...
Me: *pouts* aw...
Yami: *smirk* meet me after school hun
Me: humph
Yami: *laughs and leaves room*
Me: ANYWAYZ, PLEASE CONTINUE!!! OF COURSE U ALWAYZ DO!!! SO, JUST CONTINUE!!!