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...*SERIOUS EYE TWITCH*....*TH TWH TWITCH* .....you dont update soon i might not stop twitching....*hunts for good knife* *leaves to go stab asshole that shot mokuba* *hugs seto* it's ok seto, he'll pull through like he always does *hug*

First of, that bineedneeds to get bent. Your right. Well, her loss, not yours.

Reads story, squeealing happily at al the good lemons. Squeals at Otogi and Lexi.

What?? Kill Tris. No!!

What?? They Hit Mokie!!
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Lady Elfskye

OMG OH MY FUCKING GOD!! WHAT AN ENDING!! HOLY SHIT!!! OMG OMG OMG OMG I WA THE THE EDGE OF MY SEAT THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE FIC!! oh and dont worry about what that bitch said, this is by far the GREATEST fic i have EVER read, your writing skills is excellent and the pis iis intricate and complex (and origional) ... i love the dialogue between the characters, and i dont think you should change a thing about this... if this became a manga i would SURELY buy it ... please dont kill mokiy hey heart would break!

Aten: holds pointer to chalkboard* OUr word for today is Dead...D-E-A-D.
Aria: *hair twitch* Why did you do that to Mokuba? You must love blood....I GOT DADDY'S BLOODLUST! ME ME ME!!!
Aten: *shakes head* Dear, Ra, why me?

Nice lemons (getting weapon). So touching, Rog is a gently lover. Tris and Joey, wonderful (sharpens knife). ANd poor Otogi get him some action please. (Grabs DDYD) AND FIX MO! NOW!

Yay!!! I so can't wait for the next chapter! I love Bakura in your stories, it makes me want my own! I loved this stroy so far, don't make me wait too long. Please???? *tries her best 'Yugi-puppy-dog-eyes'*

What can possibly be said... my emotions are off the charts right now... and it's all your fault. I screamed out loud when I saw you updated... Tristan kissing Otogi was just too cute... aww, Kitten... awww... Lexi hiding in Otogi's hair.... awww.... Otogi and Lexi growing closer... awwwww.... Joey having a talk with Roger... a little... we.. b.. but it was a sweet thing for him to do.... great lemons... and then of course Mokuba.... you just had to go take an upbeat chapter and end it like that... and I thought "lexi's mom's" (if that is her real name... LOL) kidnapping attempt was bad... oh shesh... I guess sometimes u have to wait till the one you love gets attacked in the streets before you stop acting like an asshole. Oh well... anyway... despite the evil cliffhanger... I LOVED this chapter.. one of my favorites... okay, enough of that... I'll stop writing this review now... ^_^

Yuji: ;_;!! Whhhhaaaaaaaaaa!! Moki!!
Yumi: To believe that if Moki wasn't there Tristan would've gotten shot or if Roger didn't make Moki go talk with Seto, Tris would've gotten shot
Yuji: Both are bad!!
Yumi: True
Yuji: Why Moki why be mean to Moki!!??
Yumi: That an interesting chap
Yuji: Moki could be dead!!
Yumi: Part of the conflict.
Yuji: But Moki was going to marry Roger!!
Yumi: Well if he's dead he isn't
Yuji: Why are you being mean. You're being just as bad as Seto!!mi: mi: What do you want from me!? The only thing I really enjoyed were the lemons!! Yum ^_^
Yuji: But what about the other stuff?
Yumi: Eh. Lets see. Tris call Duke kitten and smooched him, Seto is being an asshole and pratically dosowned the boy, Yami was jumped last (lol), Yugi thinks Seto's an asshole, Joey....is horny for Tris, Duke can use his hair to hide Lexi, Mr. Tayler wants someone to kill Tris, Roger want to marry Moki, Moki is feeling pain in being prepared and didn't got good advice from Joey. I think that all. Oh yeah Lexi was being extremely adoreable!!
Yuji: You remembered all that?
Yumi: Yup. So of course I read the other things too. Not just the lemons
Yuji: ok
Yumi: Now I would kill the author. But I wo bec because she is my friend and I wouldn't be able to find out what's next. So please update
Yuji: UPDATE!!

OMG....how sad....as usual, this chapter and story are good ;-D

BTW, don't pay attention to the nutty reviewer. If she / he did read your work, then he / she would realize that it is not in script form.... On the other hand, those who do appreciate your work are still here supporting you on every chapter with reviews and stuff.

And a writer's best accomplishment is if the characters come to life that people could relate to them.

Hope everything's going well with the store. Keep me posted, and please update soon ;-D

I can't even begin to tell you how much I LOVE this fic! Actually, I love all your stuff ^_^.

This one... it's just... amazing, for lack of a better word on my part. I can't wait to read more ~_^