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for Rush

by Taiorami

person Jessica
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW...that is sad...O.O...Jou getting injured just by getting shoved while standing there...and Ryou is fuckin' hot!...dominating Bakura like that! What will happen with Bakura? How will Jou's injuries play out? PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE COMING TO FINISH THIS! I CAN'T STAND TO THINK SUCH A WELL-WRITTEN STORY IS GOING TO SIT HERE UNFINISHED! I love reading stories where the characters don't originally know each other or hang out with a different crowd than normal; your plot truly is original! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE SAY YOU'RE COMING TO UPDATE!... *giant chibi eyes*...*quivering lower lip*...you know, begging isn't beneath me...

...I hope you read this and know that you still have fans that would love to hear from you!...

...Thanks anyway for a taste of good writing, even if it is unfinished...

...*I promised myself I wasn't gonna cry*...BWWWWWAAHHHAHAHHAHA...COME BACK TO US!...HOW COULD YOU ABANDON US!...NOOOOOOO!...

...okay..I'm out...
person amee
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So good..you must write more. Neeeed Bakura/Ryou chair sex! NOW!
Poor Jou, btw. I mean gods, Seto really 'nudged' him hard didnt he. lol. Please write more.
As to your question (great idea btw) I dont think Ryou would be a masochist (maybe your Ryou would, but not the real one, Lol!) but i imagine he would still like to dominated, espically by said Bakura. (not that they wouldnt swap over every now and then..Mmm *daydreams*) so there you have it, Ryou highly enjoys being on the bottom, LOL!
UPDATE SOON!
person Marina
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Come on!!! UPDATE!!! this is a great story!!! and I CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!!!!
person person
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update, damn you. *glares*
person person
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic kicks ass. Seriously. And hell, the song Rush, kicks MAJOR ass! I love those lyrics. *salutes you*
person angel
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please finish this fic.
person WolfGirl90
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wondering when you're gonna update that is if you're still writing this story. Jou and Seto... I like the sound of that. Please update soon! ^_^
person ShadowWolfGirl
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story o_o and no ones reviewed I Thinkkkkkkkk But UPDATE :D Please o-o
person Uke Kit
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are a tease! AND YOU NEVER POSTED THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! *cries* I wanna see what happens!
person amber
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT!!! this is the hottest thing i've ever read, dear good!!!! I fucking loved the story!!! plz, plz, finish, i wanna know what happens next, i need to know what the game is!!!! and Jou and Seto!!! they are soo cute!! plz plz finish!!