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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a really nice story. But I think the chapters are a little short. Please go on!!!
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, don't listen to ppl, you're grammar might not be the best, but it's the choice of enjoyment, and you enjoy it. Next, never heard of a turban pants, in northern Africa, and Southwest Asia, they wear garb, long dresses(womyn) to stringed pants, made of their livestock. I enjoy this story very much, can not wait for you to update soon.
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January 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You had a good story line and plot. . . but then you had to ruin it by your writting unskillfulness. . .it would of been better if you would of just gave it to some one else to write. . . don't write anymore fics 'cause you SUCK at it!!!!!!
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job hon! Keep it up Loved the yaio part.
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just thought I should point out some spelling errors. If you would like me to go over this for you, I will. Im not trying to be mena, Im just pointing them out for you. I think you've got a good start.
Iris
Iris
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January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great update hon *yawns* it's 2 am need sleep. keep it up
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
please update soon, this story is getting quite interesting
:+)
:+)
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Update soon OMG POOR YAMI AWWW PLEASE UPDATE SOON I WANNA KNOW MORE PLEASE ^_^
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great story love it please update soon.
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December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the fic hon I love it ^_^
and thank you sweetie for the review *hugs*
and thank you sweetie for the review *hugs*