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This chapter and the one before, where you talk about Kaiba's own feelings and how it feto dto destroy your emotions and how you get a rush of pride when you should feel guilty and sad... That reminds me of how I used to be.. I think that's why I love this story so much (besides the fact it is so well written and fantastically well thought out) it really hits close to home with me. But I really look forward to reading more on this... Kaiba really does take the revenge thing pretty far, not that I blame him in his life the only thing one has is his pride and dignity and I know he kind of lost that when Jou hit him...

Anyway Ie the the whole dueling scene at the party, too bad Kaiba got too greedy for his own good. And what you said at the end about how we hand out our own weaknesses and destruction... This is definitely true... I have nothing but compliments to offer you, since there were no flaws to speak of that I saw... So I hope you continue soon...
"We are the cause of our own downfalls, and most of the time we are not aware of it."



--Seth

YD: OOOOO..Seto wants revenge!!
DD: This story is really good.
YD: And it's nice to see someone who can take suggestions as something OTHER than flames.
DD: But...we have no suggestions for this story.
YD: We're loving it the way it is.
DD: Tho I personally think Seto should be shot for being such an ass to Mokuba.
YD: Agreed.
DD: And I'm loving two chapters at a time.
YD: Keep up the good work, kiddo!

uh-oh

who's gonna win!!!

please update soon!!

ack

what'll happen to jou?!?!

update soon!!!

A terrific third installment to this story... Everything thus far is going so wonderfully -the characters are in check, the plot is engrossing, and the excitement within me is building... I hope the next chapter comes soon... btw, I am so glad somebody punched Kaiba... I love him and all, but he sure was being a bitch here... Anyway, nice chapter, can't wait for the next one.




-Seth

Quite quite good. The setup's intriguing, and the interior monologues are very IC.

Looking forward to the next chapters.

Intense... This is one captivating story, you've written both chaps exceptionally well. The first paragraph had me hooked and reading, and now I just... Wow... Wonderful chapters indeed. I hope thou uou update soon.



--Seth

hehehe

the old elementary scool love hate rule:

the more you act like you hate someone, the more you love them

please update soon!!!!