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magnificent. utterly magnificent. hurry up with 'fallen', i am dying with anticipation!

This story was incredible. Congratulations on keeping the thread of Seto's darkness all the way through the story. It would have been so easy to have him capitulate in the end beg Joey for his forgiveness; or have Seto live and Joey die and he realize finally what he has lost or a thousand other scenarios along that line. I have no idea if you even considered something like that but the way you ended the story kept the integrity of the storyline all the way through. And though Seto didn't achieve his goal of Joey dying along with him, I think he would have been just as pleased with the Mutt pledging his ever dying love for Seto even after all that happened. I can picture him down in Hell sneering up at the blond's stupidity even after the way he was treated. One last thing I liked the way you had Seto develop some feelings for Joey (and I really think he did) but the darkness in his soul was too overpowering to allow him let those feelings to reablosblossom. Congratulations on this story, it has become one of my favourites, very dark and depressing but very well done.
Akuchan

AWWWWWWWW HOW SAD KEEP GOIN

Hm, this story is really good! Seto is really fucked up, he needs some help! This fic seems to be playing out just like his dule with Yami did, he starts of at a truce, in the middle he could have one, but his ego and overconfidence tears him apart in the end. Lets just hope he "loses" this dule with jou in the end.

YD: Noting like a little Seto being an ass to start the morning right!
DD: You said it!
YD: We love that you're updating so quickly.
DD: Can't wait for the next chapter!!

ackkkkk

i wanna go cry for poor jou!!!!!

no no no kaiba can't do this to him!!!

T__T

mew

Wow... this fic is really something. I really liked the way you put Kaiba and joey, I think you can make a lot with this story !! I mean... WOW !! I think is a very original idea !! but tell me.... will it has a happy ending?? I picture myself a lot of posibilities for the ending !! any oportuniti that you would give a clue?? yeah?¡? lol .
OHH and take my congrats on your updates !! I hate to WAIT !! lol, i mean I know is not easy and all, but THANKS!!!
see ya
XOXO

ur story's funny! i like joey and seto as a couple. please make them a coulpe! i so want them to be. is there going to be lemon? i need a seto/joey lemon.

*pulls Seto's hair* YOU BIG MEANIE!! BE NICE TO JOU, HE'S MAH FAVORITE CHARACTER (and cute:O) YOU MIGHT BE CUTE AS HELL, BUT IF YOU HURT HIM!!

update soon!!

--Araki

Damn.....
This is without a doubt one of my favorite stories ever. There's an awful lot of mushy lovey-dovey stuff for Jou/Kaiba, I like that this one is starting of pretty vicious and underhanded. I alsjoy joy that Kaiba really would be the type to try and pull everyone down with him.
I absolutely love it and can't wait for you to continue. I'm torn between wanting Kaiba to go through the whole messy plan and wanting Jou to wake up that damned icy heart! No matter which way you're leading, I'm following.
My kudos to you!
(Since I only just found this story and have no idea how quick you are with updates, I'll give you the standard reviewer's plea: Update soon!!! lol)