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for The Ride

by DeliaArc

person Fel5
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story was..a path of dark, twisted, alluring glory. If you decide to never write anything again, everyone will easily forgive you, after having read this masterpiece. I'm not one to usually cry at sad stories, but now..I got a lump in my throath, and it takes a lot to do that.
You have my deepest respect and highest opinion for creating such a wonderful st and and I do hope, you will do so again. Thank you.
person ME-Kiddie
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay! how sad is that *cries*
Poor Seto Poor Jou!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ever heard of "happy endings?" and they lived happily ever after?

anywayz, this was a good story!
person YamiJou
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles* that was sad...poor jou...and poor kaiba too even though he was a jerk...
person Shadow
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow that was deep :sobs: incredible story !!
person alostblackcat
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
awwwww that was sooo sad

i need to go cry some more

*whimper*

so so so sad!!!

person alostblackcat
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
T_T

wahhhhhhhhh

so sad.... jou is such a sweet person.... if it were me.... *shudder*

such a well written depressing fic......

i need to go cry some more...

T_T
person Sapphire
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I guess Kaiba won the last round of that dule. Damn that was depressing, but what happened to jou?
person Kschur32
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
HARSH! This story has had me on the edge of my seat. I wish I could think of another word for this chapter, but Harsh is the word. While Seto and Joey are my favotite charaters and I hate to se them abused in any way. This story is good. The charaters and what they do are belivable with in the story. Is Seto really dead? Do we get to see how Joey reacts to the truth and then Seto's death? What will happen to Mokabu? I can't wait for the next chapter.
person araki
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*tears*

NOOOOOOO WHY SETO!!?? WHY DO YOU HAVE TO BE SO MEAN JUST BECAUSE YOU ARE NOT HAPPY!!! JOU HAS A GOOD LIFE, EVEN IF IT IS BAD, BE NICE FOR ONCE!!! ahem...okay...well...please update when possible, I shall be waiting
person kschur32
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
What an ending! Very well done. Thank you for the s. ks.