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for A Winter's Tale

by Wknightmare

person KC
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: whoa, nice going there!!!
Yami: here we go again
Me: *whines* koi? Could u grab me a can of soda?
Yami: what kind?
Me: pepsi
Yami: *runs to get a can of pepsi*
Me: *smirk* Anywayz, PLEASE CONTINUE 2 UPDATE!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!
Yami: *out of breath* here koi... please, continue 2 update
Me: *grabs soda* my koi changed a lot since christmas *drinks from can*
Yami: its only been two days koi
Me: *smirk* i know, anywayz, PLEASE CONTINUE AND 'T W'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE!!!
Yami: *grabs can away from me and began drinking all of it*
Me: HEY, GET YOUR OWN!!!
Yami: why didn't i think of that while i was running back here??? *runs to the storage room*
Me: ah, the cans arenin tin the storage room koi!!! *shrugs* Anyway, continue and hurry please!!! *runs after Yami*
person Red Lion Phoenix
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* This is so sad! That must have been one hell of a fight! *sniff* Ya gonna write more? I have no clue how I'd want this fic to end if ya are...and usually I can! In other words, I'm hooked on just this one song fic! Well done! Even if this fic is done, I can't wait to see what other stories ya write! WOW!
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwww poor guy! This was a very sad and moving story. But great at the same time.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
DD: That was good!
YD: Please...it was SAD!!
DD: Are you crying?
YD: *sniffle* No.
DD: Is there going to be any more?
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O.o is that the end?! NO!!! it cannot be! **sobs** continue plaese it sad T.T
person kschur32
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Don't end it her!!! !!! This is so sad and I hate seeing the jou (joey) upset. I mean seto needs to cool off and come back. Please add to the story.