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for first christmas

by sunlitmorning

person Kaz
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I love your fic its the best, I was like 'OH MY GOD' when Yami proposed to Yugi, it was so sweet and I was shocked. And when Malik fainted I was once again like'OH MY GOD' I LOVED it. Through all the chapters I read I was like 'awww how cute' It's especailly cute when Ryou giggles the way you described it was so cute. I love your fic and cant wait for when the next chapter comes out. I look ard ard to it. Well Bye
person Paulina
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The marriage is coming please up date it's great
person Yaky
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Didn't expect it either *giggles*, cute!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man that was a good update and not being on the net long can drive me nuts to. Not sure if you had that power out in the summer that was in Ont canada and some of the usa. I went crazy. anyways more fics and updates I love them

person Yaky
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW, absent a few days and look at all that I've missed!!! GREAT updates keep it up!
person Stacey
schedule January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool you update the 5th chap, exellenHey Hey this was very good . Update so more please?
person shadow-hunter
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great story love it please update soon.
person Allison
schedule December 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Add more at the last chapter when Yugi finds the surprize!What's next?^~
person KitsuneNaisa
schedule December 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Funny! anallyally good (not to mention spicy ^_^) Hurry and update, ok?
person Yaky
schedule December 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awww, that was so CUTE and funny *giggles* great job ^___^!