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for Jouyouheki: The Series

by Starchan

person alostblackcat
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
he loves jou!!!

ya!
!

about your other story, i think you should post it, it sounds cool

please update soon!!!
person Linda
schedule January 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINISH IT! YOU MUST! PLEASE FINISH IT ASAP!
person alostblackcat
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww poor joujou

mew

i feel so sorry for him...

please update soon!!!!
person Kschur32
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooookaaaaaaaaay. I always thought that Joey is stronger that this. I like the story. I is an intersting way to approach the characters. Joey needs to find his back bone though or Sto will end up destroying him. Relationships that are that one sided end up in someone being hurt badly.
person KC
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me: *blinks* that was a surprised
Yami: *yawns* what time is it?
Me: *smirk* its 11:10 in the morning koi
Yami: SHIT! THAT EARLY? I SLEPT LIKE ONE IN THE MORNING!
Me: doesn't matter anyway, yesterday was our nite... *purrs*
Yami: *smirk* yea, you were shouting and yelling so loud that the neighbors could hear you
Me: *blushes* SHUT UP! AT LEAST WE DIDN'T WENT TO THE PARTY LAST NITE!
Yami: *purrs* i know, but we could do it again koi
Me: NO WAY! I'M TOO SORE RIGHT NOW!
Yami: *laughs* ah, oh well, tomorrow perhaps! *leaves room*
Me: *blushes* um, well, CONTINUE 2 UPDATE AND DON'T WAIT 2 LONG 2 UPDATE, OK??? CONTINUE!!! *runs after Yami*
person Wren
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Seto is such an evil bastard--I love him! I hope Jouyouheki gets him back and actually makes Seto fall for him. Then how's the others bitch?! ^_^
person A person
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ wow, good story, please continue ASAP!
person me
schedule December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OHHHHHHHH! this is good...so sad...poor jou...i hope seto turns nice later......think...happy ending!
person alostblat˜§at
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i think i read and reviewed this before..

but i love it

hope you update soon!!!
person Nomalaz
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oooooo mor moremoremoremore This is good!